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Sunday, August 3, 2014

Cebu Coffee Shops (Part 1)

By: Ram

“I wish to marry the most beautiful girl in the world.” I remembered saying this, twelve or so years ago.
Oh how things have changed…

First of all, this is my story; it happened to me and it’s up to you if you believe me or not (though the names are changed and the conversations aren’t really a word for word recollection, the thought still remains the same and so does the story). I’m new here, probably only a month has passed since I stumbled upon this site. As to how I found it, well, it was one horny night for me and a couple of keywords in google and then bam, here I was. Anyway, based on the stories I’ve read here, I’m supposed to introduce myself so; I’m Ram, a nineteen year old Cebuano, tall, tan and I’m not well built, just average I guess (I enrolled myself in a gym but sometimes my laziness gets the best of me). I won’t lie, there are muscles here and there but that’s as good as it gets hahahaha am I gwapo? I don’t know, I’ll leave it to your imagination (and I won’t even try to say “people say I am handsome/attractive” or “people say I look like *insert handsome actor here*”). As I’ve said, I’m not phony. I don’t know if I’m gay or bi, I like who I like and I love who I love so let’s leave it to that. One thing is clear though, I am not effeminate or flamboyant. I’m comfortable in English so I’ll write my story in English. Here it goes.

Two years ago, I was a freshman in a medical school with a good reputation here in Cebu. On the first day of my college life, I was pretty much a loner since most of my barkada took up another course in another prestigious school (this school has a lot of campuses hahaha) and some went to Manila. I knew some people but they were mostly batchmates and some classmates that I wasn’t really close with but I decided to go with them rather than to spend most of my time alone. Since it was the first week and we were still freshmen, our teachers would only come inside the room and collect our study loads then leave (but on wed-fri on the same week, they started to give short lectures) so we kept on going to the coffee shops surrounding the school and frequented Bo’s coffee most especially.
One day while we were in Bo’s (I think there were around 5 of us) a group of second year students, in the same department as us, came in and sat a couple of tables away from us. They were loud, and we were loud so basically, the peaceful coffee shop turned into a den of noisy teenagers. One of the barista began to make shushing sounds but both of our groups ignored him so he raised his voice and told us to keep quiet. My friends and I looked at the table with the second years and they too looked at us, we exchanged looks and we all burst out into fits of laughter. We continued to chat but in low voices until we had to leave for our next class. Just as we left, I felt a tap on my shoulder.

“Bai excuse me.” I turned around and saw a guy, one of the second years, grinning behind me.
“Yes bai?” I raised my eyebrow in question.
“You see that girl?” he pointed inside and I saw a girl try to hide her face, “she thinks your cute man gud. That’s all bai hahahaha” and then he went back inside. My friends began to mock me on the way to our class.

That was the first time I saw him and our first interaction. In between classes, we’d bump into their group and there would be teasing and the girl would try to slap them and I would try to stop my friends but he’s the worst, because he would try to push the girl to me or me to the girl. But it was all playful.

Friday one week before the week for the finals of the first term, I went to Bo’s alone after my 3pm class. My friends and I were supposed to go to Plantation Bay to spend the weekend there but I told them that I had an important dinner that Friday and that I was being picked up. I promised them that I will go first thing on Saturday. While waiting for my driver, I decided to do a little reading for the exam. After a while, the second year guy came in and took the table beside mine. He was a bit preoccupied so he didn’t notice me until he came back from ordering.

“Oy bai!” he said. I looked up and he was smiling at me.
“Bai!” I smiled back.
“Sorry bitaw if you’re annoyed na by our teasing. Especially by my teasing.”
“It’s ok ra oy, it’s just teasing anyway.” We laughed.
“Yeah but Rhea thinks you really are cute though.”
“Ayaw na bi, gara na hahahaha (stop it, that’s already too much)”
“I’m not kidding! In fact I think she’d be really happy if I got your number for her!” he opened his notebook and made me write my number. I rolled my eyes and wrote it down, both of us laughing.
“I’m Jon by the way.”
“Ram.”
“Nice to meet you Ram.”
“Nice to meet you too.” We shook hands.
“Basin (maybe) it’s you who wants my number bai ha!” I joked.
“Naboang na! hahaha” (That’s crazy) he said. “Sige bai, I’ll leave you to your reading, sorry for disturbing.” And so for the next hour, we got submerged in our books. I kept on glancing at my watch, 4:30 and still my driver hasn’t picked me up yet, won’t reply to my texts or even answer my calls and it started to rain. Around 5 o’clock, Jon tapped me and said that he’ll be going to his last class. By this time, I got super pissed at my driver so I decided to get a taxi.

Obviously it was so hard to get a cab and I was already drenched to the bones by the rain. What a bad day I’m having. As I was still desperately trying to get a cab under the rain (by this time, I gave up trying to stay dry since it’s pointless), a black BMW stopped in front of me and the window rolled down. Jon was sitting on the driver’s seat.

“Ram! Ngano nagpa uwan man ka bai?” (Ram, why are you staying under the rain?)
“I’m trying to hail a cab bai, my driver hasn’t picked me up yet and I’m going to be late for something.”
“Sulod sa car bai, masakit gyud ka. Ihatod na tika sa inyo.” (Get inside the car or else you’ll get sick. I’ll drop you off.)
“No thanks bai, mabasa ra imo’ng car. I’ll keep waiting for a taxi.” (Your car will only get wet.) but he went out of the driver’s seat and opened the door for me.
“Sulod lagi ba! Nagpabasa na sad bya ko’s uwan ha, kung masakit ko sala gyud ni nimo.” (Get inside! I’m also under the rain and if I get sick it’s all your fault.) So I had no other choice but to get inside. He parked the car near the gas station and turned the AC down.
“I think I have some dry clothes that we can change into. It’s bad if we dry up in our wet clothes.” He reached for his bag at the back and pulled out two white shirts. We changed into them and tried to dry up.
“I thought you had a class?” I asked.
“I did but it was cancelled, naay lakaw amo’ng maestra gud.” (Our teacher had an errand to do.) “So, where do you want me to drop you off?”
“Sa Banilad ra dapit bai.” (Somewhere in Banilad will do.)
“Taga Banilad sad bya ko.” (I’m also from Banilad.)
“Really?!” he nodded and started the car. The village he lives in turned out to be near the village where I live so it was pretty convenient for both of us. He dropped me off at around 7 in the evening. Turns out, our driver got stuck in traffic and the car broke down.

After that, we’d frequently bump into each other in Bo’s (turns out he’s a coffee lover too!) and in between classes we’d say hi but his teasing still didn’t stop and it was ok. I think you could say that we became friends, in a way a freshman and a sophomore are friends. But that was it; we were friends and nothing more. Yeah I know I have urges to like guys and yeah he was handsome but I didn’t like him in a romantic kind of way. He was just Jon and I was just Ram.

Sembreak in college, I found out, was a total pain in the ass and in the wallet. Three weeks without school means three weeks without allowance and three weeks of looking for things to do. Luckily I got my driver’s license earlier (thank God for connections hehehehe) and well, I spent a lot of time road tripping and late night drives with my friends. But my favourite part was when I get to spend some alone time in random coffee shops. A good book plus a good coffee makes my day better. One day, I went to UCC Café Terrace in Ayala (I’m not a fan of coffee shops in malls because they can get pretty crowded but UCC Café has one of the best coffees and French toast). There were a handful of people but luckily there was a table vacant, near the window and I took it. Hours passed and the shop was filled with people and as I glanced towards the entrance, lo and behold who had just entered! It was Jon and his face was scanning for a free table and then he got sad because he didn’t see any. He probably didn’t see me and as he was about to leave, I called out to him and he smiled the biggest smile I had ever seen on his face.

“Ikaw ra usa?” (Are you alone?) he asked as he sat across from me.
“Yeah, I do that sometimes.”
“Ka-loner sad nimo uy!” (You are such a loner!)
“Hilom uy (shut up)! Hahahaha how about you?”
“I’m waiting for someone but I guess I’ll go to Starbucks nalang since there’s no table here.”
“Your girlfriend? Yeeee hahahaha You guys can stay here, I was about to leave anyway” (even though I wasn’t but hey, I was being a good guy)
“Joke ra bitaw, I’m not meeting anyone. It’s just me. And I don’t have a girlfriend.”
“Loner sad diay ni siya hahahaha” (Turns out you’re a loner too!) “and it’s hard to believe that a good looking guy like you doesn’t have a girlfriend!” I taunted.
“So you think I’m good looking?” he asked and smiled at me, raising his eyebrow playfully.
“Kaluod nimo oy.” (You’re disgusting) I snapped. He just laughed and went to order coffee.
He came back a couple of minutes after. “I thought you were leaving?” he asked.
“Oh so you want me to leave?”
“Joke ra gani.” He smiled again. Gad his smile.
We spent the whole afternoon getting to know each other and we didn’t notice the time until both of us began to feel hungry.
“WTF look at the time! It’s already 8 in the evening!” I said.
“Hahahahahahaha! Wow time sure does fly when you’re having fun.”
“I better go now.” I stood up to go but he stopped me.
“Let’s have dinner first.” He offered but I wasn’t quite sure I wanted to. I mean I did want to but I didn’t trust myself enough to actually say yes. Here’s the thing, I didn’t like him up to that point but after our conversation well, something inside me changed. And I swear I was afraid. I didn’t want to fall for this guy because he’ll never like me back and it only means that I’ll be spending more nights crying and hurting about him. And I’m tired of doing that to myself. And I knew that I was on my way to falling head over heels for this guy. I mean c’mon, who could resist his smile and the dimple on his left cheek? Who could say no to the eyes that disappear when he smiles and to his brown eyes? Yes, he’s gwapo. More than gwapo actually since I found out he tried participating in the school pageants.
“Ok fine but your treat.” I gave in to him.
“Ka cute nimo oy!” (You’re so cute!) He said while smiling and pushing me out the door. We ate in Café Laguna.

After our plates have been cleaned, he called for the bill and I offered to pay my share.
“No, I said I’m paying.” He insisted.
“Let’s split the bill at least.” But he shook his head.
“I would feel bad if I didn’t pay for the first date.”
“So this is a date?” I teased.
“You wish.” He said, grinning.
“Hahahaha! So let me pay then!” I pushed. He rolled his eyes and stuck his tongue out at me, “If I said that this was a date, then would you stop offering to pay?” he said.
“Maybe. But it’s impossible, two guys don’t go on dates.” I stuck my tongue at him.
“It is possible! We’re having one right now!” he laughed.
“Gaaad. Fine. But I’ll make it up to you whether you like it or not.”
“Ok then. It’s settled. This is a date-” I was about to object but he held his hand at me, “and there’s nothing you can do about it.” He laughed at me once again. I sat awkwardly, staring at him. Holy shit I was beginning to like him and I don’t know what I felt that moment but my heart fluttered and my stomach stated churning. The waiter arrived and I was still silent. He smiled and took the bill. I playfully rolled my eyes at him.

“How are you going home?” He asked as we got out of the restaurant.
“I brought my car.”
“Ay bati, ihatod unta tika.” (That sucks, I was going to drop you off.)
“Hahahaha luora na nimo oy.” (You’re getting gross.) But really, I started to blush and I was jumping up and down inside. We walked to the basement parking.
“Sige bai, this was a fun day. Thanks again!” I told him.
“Sure! I hope we can do this again some other time.” He replied.
“Let’s! And next time, it’s my treat.” He smiled and I smiled back.

That night, I wasn’t able to sleep properly. I kept on tossing and turning on my bed and his face kept on appearing in my mind. At around 2am, I received a message in my phone. It was from an unregistered number.
“Hi gwapo.” It said.
“Who’s this?” I replied.
“Imo’ng future ;)” (Your future)
“If you’re trying to be cute, don’t because it’s creepy. I think you got the wrong number.”
“Sure ko this is the right number.” At this point, I stopped replying and continued thinking about Jon and weighing my feelings for him and cursing myself for starting to like him (and cursing him too). My phone vibrated again.
“Hoy Ram it’s me bitaw. It’s Jon hahahahaha!” And when I read this, my heart did a somersault, double flip and some more somersault.
“At ma’y pa ‘your future, your future’ ka pa ha!”
“Hahahaha, I WAS trying to be cute but you are such a cock blocker!”
“Di na kailangan, cute naman ka!” At this point, I couldn’t stop smiling. We continued to text and I was going crazy. I wish you liked me too. I kept on repeating this again and again.
“Bai, can I call you? I want to let you hear something.” He said and I couldn’t contain my feelings.
“Sure.” I replied, trying to act cool even though I was about to burst. My phone rang and I answered it.
“Hello?” I said trying to hide my excitement.
“Bai.” He said on the other line. His voice is even sexier and manlier over the phone.
“Bai.” I said and there was silence for a couple of seconds, only our breathing could be heard and it was still hot.
“Hahahaha bitaw, I want you to listen to something and tell me what you think ha?” There was shuffling and movement on the other end. Then I heard him clearing his throat and a strumming of a guitar.
Shit he’s going to sing. He can sing?! Shit shit shit shit. I thought to myself. He began to sing and he sounded really good. The guitar matched his voice, he sounded like Bamboo and it was just perfect. The song sounded original, it was about falling in love and I thought to myself, Hey, maybe there is a chance for us.

The song ended and he cleared his throat.
“Hello? Ram you still there?” I was dumbfounded. I was lost for words. His voice was just perfect. Can he get even more perfect?
“Yeah, I’m still here. Kuyawa nimo bai oy!”
“Hahahaha thanks. So, how was it?”
“The song? I guess that was original, am I right?”
“Yeah it is.”
“It was great! Jon you are so good! Your voice even sounds great like I swear bai.”
“So you liked it?”
“Liked it? I loved it.” My emotions got the best of me.
“Great, then I guess she’ll like it too.” BAM, the bomb was dropped.
“Yeeeee! So you wrote that for a girl? Kinsa man bai(Who is she)?” I had to act like I was actually happy and not hurting at all. This was what I hated. This was what I told myself. And now it happened again, my heart got ripped out of my chest again. I died at that moment. I literally felt my body drop. But it was my fault but still I hated him. Tears started to fall from my eyes and I had to force myself to sound happy still, suppressing the pain.
“Classmate nako bai. Do you think she’ll like it?”
“Of course bai! She’ll love it, I loved it man gani.”
“Thanks bai! Anyway-”
“Bai I have to sleep na. I’m really sleepy already.” I said before he could say anything else. I immediately disconnected the call without waiting for his reply and after that, the tears fell even harder. My chest was heaving, it literally ached, and I was gasping for air. I slept on a tear drenched pillow that night.

To be continued. Our story is kinda long hahahahaha

169 comments:

  1. Shet memmeng I think I know the school. Hahahaha. Nice story hope to bump with u sometimes.

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  2. Nindot kaayo imong storya Dai. Dayon English pa jud. We Cebuanos are really good with the language hehehe. Update na unta dayon kay gikilig nakog kadaghan, murag upat na ka gantang ug tunga hehe

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  3. Ohohoho. I know this school. :))

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  4. the one in ramos riight? lol

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  5. I wish this story will continue as fast as possible. Many stories left me hangin' like 'wtf man?! You're breaking my head for not finishing your story!' And frustration will kill me. My uriosity will end me. Please continue this as fast as possible. Take responsibility to this art you are making. Please

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  6. Cebu Doctors College. University na sya ngayon. I should know taga CDC din ako

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  7. Bos coffee is just in front of cdc

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  8. I love ur story me sense,ouch!bitin

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  9. Bo's Ramos? I hope dali ra ni masundan bai, ganahan kos dagan sa storya. :)

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  10. Yatis... kagwapo sa story. Nice writing style bai. Next na....

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  11. Aguy! Taga-Velez. Bo's Coffee Raintree Mall.

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  12. Bai, are you a Velezian? you totally sound like one jud

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    1. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt bai haha
      -author

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    2. haha it would be awesome to know another Velezian with the same thoughts over his orientation :)

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    3. you're a velezian too? oops I slipped haha
      -author

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    4. yup, Velezian MT here bro

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    5. cool, it'd be great to get a chance to know someone in Velez who's like me too haha

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    6. yeah :) i'm starting to think that you're not from the college of MT, though. hahahaha or are you?

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    7. yeah, I'm a medtech student hahaha

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    8. Velezian PT here. HAHAHAHAHAHA. wow. love the story. kudos to the writer. maka-ahhh

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    9. Author. 3rd year MT pud ko sa velez pero wa ko kaila nimo. Ila.ila nya ta hahaha :)
      Gihatagan namo ug grade sa histo?

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    10. velez nursing here. 4th year.

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  13. Murag Bo's coffee sa ramos.. ka gilok sa story bai.. sumpaye dayon brad..

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  14. yeah I know right, kibaw ko ani na University . . . Pedro doh, I really love how you diliver the story. It just stuck me on thinking what would happen next :D

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  15. CDU ka? Are you referring to Bo's Coffee in Parkmall? If im right then Hi Schoolmate! I think batchmates ta kay im 19 too lol :)

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  16. You better hurry with the next chapters... yes with 'S'. Or else, I'll book the next flight to cebu and hunt you down. Great job, bai! #happythoughts

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    1. I've submitted na our story bai, but there are a lot of submissions man gud so it takes a while to be posted but I will continue telling our story so just stay tuned haha thanks bai, book your flight now and maybe we can hang out haha
      -author

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    2. I can't help bu re-read your story. I'm really hooked and fascinated. Looking forward to see the succeeding chapters on the next update. Thanks, bai!

      I'll be in CEB on Oct. I could be the next guy to enter Bo's coffee shop. Or if you ever swing by MNL, maybe we can enjoy coffee at my place or anywhere you may prefer. Lol! (Me talking too much) #happythoughts ^_^

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  17. 1st time ko maka comment da. Nadala ko sa istorya. Nkahimundum nuon ko sa 1st nko 5yrs ago. Nagkaila mi kay duol ra iya school sa Office nku in ramos. Im assuming his practicing na as doctor kay 2ndyr pa mn sya atong nagkaila mi. Medyo wala gipalad among gugma kay pareha mi bc ug wala pa pud cguro mga buot Pero im wishing him all the best. Uli na cguro cya sa ila sa davao karon.

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  18. that was perfect! <3

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  19. What does 'bai' mean?

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  20. One of the best stories I have read in this site. There isn't really quite a lot of entries from Cebu here so whenever I get a chance to read one, I feel proud especially when it's written in perfect (or almost perfect) English. I'm not saying I don't like the Filipino/Tagalog entries pero mas makasabot kog English or Bisaya gud.

    Hala feel gyud nako taga Velez ang ni write ani. Daghan kaayog gwapo sa ilang school bitaw. Ug feel sad nako taga Ma. Luisa na si Ram. Hahaha. Hi Ram and Jon! :)

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    1. Taga.velez jud na. Medical school with good reputation: velez/cim. Bo's coffee sa raintree. Hehe

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    2. thanks bai! I'll give you the benefit of the doubt haha
      -author

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  21. Gimingaw nuon ko sa cebu da.. tsssk. Makadumdom man sad tas mga trip2 nako sauna diha sa mall sa mango. Kana bitaw naay natio? Daghan pa ba gihapon milagro sa mga cr didto? Hahaha. Hi sa mga taga.velez diha ug cdu diay. :)

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    1. Asa nmn diay ka karon do?.. sa una na dungog na nku ni nga mga istorya about raintree mall ambot ug tinuod p pud na kay wala mn ko kasulay... hahaha..

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    2. Naa nako sa manila ga.work run bai. Dili sa raintree mall do. Didto bitaw sa may old rustans? Kanang mall taas sa natio? Naa nay 2 ka cr sa 2nd ug 3rd. Haha. Daghan kaayo sauna makig.tripping didto. Ambot lang kaha karon

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    3. Dri na pud ko manila mag 4 yrs na. Wala ko kahibaw ana da..pero naay bar dha sa imong gi ingon na mall sauna nga perti daghana ug gay/bi... naka sulod ko ana sa una ka usa bibo hinikapay bisag dili kaila..makurat ka lagi..ambot ug naa pa ba na karon. ug mo uli ko kay cebu fud trip ug beach nmn ako ka bc han.

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    4. Ahh. Asa ka sa manila bai? Sa qc ko. Limot na kos pangan ana nga bar pero nakasud nako didto sauna. Pagsud pa lang daghan na au kag makita ga.chula mga gays and bi. Nya tapad ana kay club juliana nga daghan sad au mga hubog nga koreans. Haha

      - ngohiong

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    5. Sakto ka. i forgot the name of the bar as wll. im staying in taguig. mas malingaw pa ko ug mag 22nd st bisag ako ra isa sauna. . Ka memorize nlng ko sa ilang mga jokes cge balik2x

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    6. Sounds like but i cant remember anymore.. buhi pa ba na nga bar karon?

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    7. Abri pa kaha ang 22nd st run bai? Mingaw na au kos cebu ba. Makamingaw ang danggit, chicharon sa carcar, zubuchon, cnt, la marea, baby back ribs, siomai sa tisa, manukan sa sanciangko, tuslob buwa, pungko2, larsian, lansiao sa ramos, boneless lechon sa parkmall ug labi na ang ngohiong dapit san carlos! Hahaha.makamingaw sad ang view sa tops nga perting nindota. Daghan sad au didto ba ga.labing2 kay ngit2 nya tugnaw. Hahaha. Na.homesick nuon ko da. Ahak. Haha

      -ngohiong

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    8. Naay casa verde dri katipunan sa up town center..nka try ko 3x na..nka uli ko last yr uban nko ako mga officemates, yes naa pa 22nd st pro na relocate na... mas nice tong sauna na place niya.

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    9. Ahh. Asa na diay run? Aw o naka.try na sad ko diay bai sa casa sa up town center once. Naa sad silay lain branch pero different name diri sikatuna village. The porch. Nya bai kadumdom kas handuraw nato sa lahug? Nia na diri sad ba sa sikatuna! Hehe. Lingawa nako oi. Daghan sad gatambay didto nga mga cebuano. Ang tag.iya mga taga.cebu sad. Nya nia na sad qc ang alberto's pizza. Aligre kaayo

      - ngohiong

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    10. Asa ba na dapit pud sikatuna? di kaayu ko laagan. hihihi..

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    11. Nawala lagi ako comment dri gahapon. Tsssk. Sa may kamias corner anonas bai. Savemore

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    12. Nawala pud ako comment.ni reply ko with my numbr ..cguro bawal pero naa mn lgi ko nkita nga nag post ug numbr.. pabor2x lng cguro

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  22. Great job bai! :D Sumpayi dayon.

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    1. Mag 2wks nko sig basa dri..haha..murag weekly ang posting..maugtas ka ug hulat

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    2. Maghimo na lang tag ato own story bai? Hahaha

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    3. thanks bai! yes, daghan pa'g sumpay amo'ng story but because there are a lot of submissions here, dugay gyud siya ma post, stay tuned lang bai
      -author

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  23. Shit bai! i never comment on a story. But this. This is pure awesome. HAHA. ikaw ra jud naka pa comment nako diri bai. Velezian ka sa? HAHA. Continuation na bai. please bai. HAHA

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    1. Iisa palihog mga kamot sa taga.velez nursing or medtech. Hahaha

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    2. *raises hand* haha
      -author

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    3. thanks bai and yes wa pa nahuman ang story namo, stay tuned lang bai

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  24. nice story. anyone from muntinlupa here?

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  26. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story; now I'm craving the next part. Lol. Also, please take your time writing the continuation. I know I'm not supposed to tell you what you're supposed to do but I hope you won't hurry the write-up for the next one. Don't take too much time to submit it, though. :D

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    1. thanks! I've submitted the second part and the 3rd is on its way. I've been busy lately but I'm trying my best to recall everything and write them down :)
      -author

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  27. thanks for your feedback guys! and yes, I'm continuing to write our story and I had submitted the second part just stay tuned! pwede na pang MMK amo'ng story? hahahaha

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    1. Will it be a good ending or not?

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    2. stay tuned but I can tell you, there's a lot of heart breaking and tears to our story
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  28. Pwede na kaayo bai. Grabe nga labing2. Haha. Pero taymsa. Bo's sa raintree or Bo's atbang cebudoc o mandaue? Haha

    - ngohiong

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    1. sa tanaw nimo bai asa? haha basta Bo's ;)
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    2. Klaro na nga sa bo's ramos raintree. Hehe. Ga.klase pa ba gihapon mos residencia? Nya musta na man ang velez? Miasenso na? Last nako tambay kay naka.afford man ug papintal? Haha

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    3. mao ra gihapon bai, naniguwang with the teachers
      -author

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    4. Aww. Cge lang. Ngilngig bitaw ig.graduate pohon. 100%passing dayon. Wooot! Hehe

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  29. Nice one bai. You narrated the story very well! Velez? CDU? woah! :)
    prestigious school that has a lot of campuses? Yay! USC jud na dah! :)) walay taga USC dha ready to share the campus stories? Share nya yan schoolmates! :-) thumbs up mr. Author :-)

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  30. Ka cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Cant wait for the next. Mu adto ko unya'g Bo's, Midterm week rba.

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  31. So nice. Just cant get enough. :)
    Exploring more of cebu. Lol

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  32. Grabee tong story na to! Grabe din ung emotions ko habang binabasa to!! Nakakakilig!!!!

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  33. Hey author! are u guys still in cebu? i tried to apply before sa Velez but i got rejected. ended up at CDU but got debarred. haha. I dont usually like to read love stories but this one is pretty good. Makes me want to open my heart again. Great job.

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    1. thanks bai! open your heart to possibilities bai!
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  34. Nosebleeed ko sa english hahahaha

    -mr engr

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  35. :) feelin pain. You thought that song was for you but not. Reality hurts dude. Don't be damn to fall inlove with that guy cause in the end your just hurting your self. As much as possible you must start to ignore him.

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  36. IM CHINITO MAY DIMPLES MAPUTI NICE EYES LIPS TEETH 5 9 135 09204089906 FOR SER REL/SOP/SEB
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    GALING NG TAPING NEED KAUSAP SA LANDLINE AT YUNG MAGTETEXT NG LANDLINE 09204089906 FOR SER REL

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  37. It's entertaining to read these comments made by his fellow Cebuanos like I can only imagine how they are talking with this dialect. Feels like I want to learn how to too :))

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    1. learn cebuano then! it's a pretty neat dialect (I'm a bit biased though haha)
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  38. Bai, murag kaila ko aning Jon dah. Hehehe. Mura ra pud. Anyway, nice story, looking forward for the next part. Basta Cebuano, da best!! :)

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    1. sure bai oy, wa ka kaila oy haha ubec city represent hahaha
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    2. Hahaha kalma lang bai. Mura ra gani. Wa pud ko sure kung kaila ko niya. Hahaha bitaw, idol na tamong duha bai! :)

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    3. Kinsa may BMW diha sa Velez?

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  39. One boring night lead me to the site. Like you I am a coffee lover. I love the story and I was actually craving for more. I'll be in Cebu this September since my 5th diving certification will be there. Kudos for giving me a tingling feeling.

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  40. This is my first time to comment on a story. It's awesome. Heart-wrenching, but awesome. Please post the second part... and Ram, i would like to let you know that i'm already falling in love with you. Wish i could get your number.

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    1. thanks! I've submitted the second part, it just needs to be posted by the admin (it'll probably take another 2 or 3 weeks probably but stay tuned bai!)

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  41. Ahhh <3 maka-inlove story oi..Nadala natakos kilig ni Ram (hahaha,kabayut oi) ... :''( Atol nimo Jon oi !!
    And I feel you Ram.I experienced it a half a decade ago. Lisod ang ma-inlove's sa the same sex :''(
    Especially when only you who knows that you also fall for a guy too.Haaaaaa flashback ang sakit
    Thankful ko na Move on nako dugay na...Hahaha....Next Ram Please !!!!!! :D

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    1. Btw wala ko ka relate ana inyung campus2 but Good to know Ram na on the way nasad ang Chap.3. Cant wait for the next Chapter :))
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  42. Really. Really good. Best ive read so far.

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  43. Good story bai...hope to read the next chapter soon...bitin but worth the wait cguro next chapter ani buh...

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    1. Bai. :) Velezian sad ko. Magkita nya ta ha. Bwahahaha. Medtech ka? Ganahan kag notes sa 3rd yr. Haha. Or intern na ka. Sundi na dayun ni ha. :)

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    2. ^^^haha lunch at the bbq station sa foodpark bai
      -author

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    3. HAHAHA. WA KO KADUMDUM LAGE ANA. BANGAA NA KO OY! HAHAHA. AHMMM!!! Saman? Makigkita ka? Hahaha. Di lang sad tika pugson. Hahaha. Panglibre nalangs Casa bai. Lol.

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    4. TAGALAS NA LANG D.I TA KAY BARATO. BWAHAHA

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    5. or maybe you like jollibee nalang bai? or greenwich? haha
      -author

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    6. Hahaha. Pwedeee. Sigeeee Kanus.a mana bi? Bahahaha.

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    7. after midterm week? haha
      -author

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    8. Intrams na lang bai. Naa pa kog Manila gud. Lol. :) Bakasyon family. Hahaha. Unsa imo yr karon?

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    9. Unsaon man tka pag contact bi? Hahaha. Waaaa. Di man jd kha ka halata? Lol. :3 Jk. Unsa imo yr run oy? ��

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    10. the struggle is real gyud bai haha no bai, you?
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    11. Hahahahahaha. :) No sad bai! Ganahan btaw kayu ko makaila nimo! Kay pisti k kag story! Nimal HAHAHA. I really hope wa ka.ga maoy bai! Hahahahaha. Murag wa pa man ka kaget over. :D I don't know unsaon tika pag contact man. Kibaw ko di sad nimo pwede ibutang diri. Tayaaaa way lami! HAHAHAHA.

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    12. Wa naka nireply bai! Bwahahaha. Batia!

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    13. hahaha taya pisti ug story bai haha waste of time ang maoy bai :) char waste of time i don't know bitaw bai haha
      -author

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    14. way ayu! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. PASAKYA NALNG NYA KOS IMONG CAR! Hahahaha.
      Dramahas waste of time bai. Di mada! BWAHAHAHA

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    15. the struggle is real gyud bai haha
      -author

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    16. Bai. Kita ta next week bai!!! Sa man go ka? Intrams bitaw. BWAHAHAHA. REPLY DAYUN DIHA. Dukol ka run. Lol.

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    17. asa man bai? ig opening? I'll be wearing green hahahaha
      -author

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    18. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. ATAYAAAA!!! NIADTO MAN KO GANINA. :) Asa ka nilingkod dapit? Lol. Asa ka nig wed? :)

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    19. I was cheering for the volleyball team hahahaha I'll be at the gym ig wednesday
      -author

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    20. the small building that we call gym I mean hahaha cheering for volleyball and basketball
      -author

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    21. Hahaha. Bai!!! Batia wa jd ta nagkita!!! Shet mengs. :) Wa ko kitas imo comment gud. Wa sad ko niadtog school. Hahahaha. Nagstudy ko. Waaaa. Way lami!

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    22. panghatag 3rd year notes bi hasta test paper sa previous exams hahahaha
      -another 3rd year mt sa velez

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    23. Baiiii!!!! Hahahahaha. Magkita nata. Pakyu kaaaa!!!

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  44. Daghana diay mga taga.cebu diri oi. Haha! Kinsa taga.manila dri? Iisa ang kamot. Sa qc ko. UP village. Haha

    - ngohiong

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  45. Hi Author! Kudos to your wonderful experience, cognitively written down, then became an effective motivation for all of us your readers(more of fans/followers i guess?). By the way, i really want to meet someone like you in the future. Hoping to see you soon in one of the coffee shops there in cebu! I'll be booking my flight soooooooonest! Thanks anyway!

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  46. such a good story...this is my first time to comment on a story..everything is perfection..!!!
    you are so good in english i hope that i can express my thought in english too..
    this story can really help me in my Business Communication subject...nxt plss..???thanks in advance

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  47. in all fairness magaling at exciting ang pagkakasulat mo mr. author. Ito ata ang most commented na kwento dito GJ!


    -seanm1669

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  48. Wow. I really love this story. Sana masundan agad :) -Luka

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  49. Bonito gad diila istorya.. Ken aqui sabe man chavacano? Mui bien na author...

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  50. Daghana diay bisdak diri oy! Hehe. Karon ra ko nakabalik ani nga site ug mao pa gyud ni nga story ang nisugat nako. Nice. Palihug ko publish sa chapter 2 and so on.

    P.S. No offense ha, pero some students sa velez noh saba gyud. Hahaha. Kasuway ko ng.lunch sa dimsum break mango, mostly velez students ang nanga.on pud, saba kaayo ang sulod sa dimsum. Haha

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    1. thanks bai! yes I've submitted na the 2nd and 3rd chapter, waiting to be published nlng bai! and yes, Velezians are noisy gyud bai haha
      -author

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    2. Thanks! Looking forward. Support gyud basta bisaya bai. Haha.

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  51. Author, are u guys still in Velez right? the bo's there is kinda small. i prefer the newer one near baseline. cozier and the lights are brighter. naa lang langaw. lol

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  52. I loved how the story went, though there were a few grammar blemishes. Nevertheless, this is the kind of story which I could relate with because I had a similar experience. I'd love to edit and proofread this story (if given the chance). Keep writing! Can't wait for part 2. :)

    -Ravin

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  53. I loved how the story went, though there were a few grammar blemishes. Nevertheless, this is the kind of story which I could relate with because I had a similar experience. I'd love to edit and proofread this story (if given the chance). Keep writing! Can't wait for part 2. :)

    -Ravin

    P.S. English Instructor here

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  54. gikilig ko author haha...i must admit dagdag kilig ang bisaya nga convo

    btw hi ninyo guys first time magcomment
    taga cebu sad ko..hope to meet u bai

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  55. Oh lorde unta the admin posts the continuation na kay this has got to be the most gilok story here! No petty indio drama! Props to the author!

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  56. Nakakabitin naman grabe..

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  57. Bitaw, sa tinud anay gipul an na kos mga uwag uwag ug bumasa(though the site says it all). Karon ra sad ko kabalik ug check diri. So pagkakita sa CEBU sa title, aw wa daun mg hesitate ui. Turned out that this is one of the good reads kadto sad Bantayan Love Story. Basa sad kos mga comments (103 so far wow) , then daghan man sad diay bisaya mobasa diri. haha.

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  58. Maka-04C jud kog ahat ani. Mag Bo's-Raintree nako mutuon. Holy shit. The story was not only fun to read but you pick up the right emotions portrayed in it. Good job, Velezian Author. Unta magMed kas UST, bai. Sabay tag Med. Awh. Taga-Cebu diay ko. (As if it's not klaro.)

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    1. Unsa ka nga year bai? PGI here sa manila. Hehe

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    2. planning to take up Med in UST or UP bai! haha and thanks!
      -author

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    3. Holy shit. I'm going to apply for UST and UP Manila PGH too! I mean those are my dreams schools. Also, St. luke's. But it's too expensive. Anyway, I'm a 04C away from you author. Hopefully our paths meet.

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  59. Kagelok sad sa imong estorya bai oi!! Mo kirig man sad tag ahat ani. Hahaha
    Great job bro! Hanas naba kag phlebotomy?? ;D

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  60. Author, everyday gyud ko magrefresh sa bookmark just to check if naa na ang continuation sa story. Haha! It's different gyud if there's love love bah, haha. Nice one! Naay mga tga usc dri? Submit sad mu ug love love na story guys! Part 2 na bai pls :D haven't tried studying sa bo's raintree kay ma out of place ko magstudy with calculator and computations, tanan naka highlighters and thick books ^_^

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    1. thanks bai! keep posted lang gyud haha
      -author

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  61. So mura di ay kag si JM de Guzman bai? HAHA

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  62. Pag CIM lang bai kay mas daghan pag gwapo diria sa Cebu, with brains pa jud. XD

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    1. Tama.. hahaha. Take it from an alumnus

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    2. i dont know bai, been wanting to study in UST gyud haha but we'll see
      -author

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    3. Ayaw na pag UST brad. CIM is better or maybe the best in the Philippines. CIM is at par with UP Manila sad. HAHAHA. Sales talk lang. Unsa na diay ka year ron brad?

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  63. Dugaya sa sumpay Bai... Kapila na kog balik2 sa site to check for updates...

    -Takeshi

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    1. lagi bai, I've submitted na the 2nd and 3rd part, we'll have to wait lang gyud bai
      -author

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    2. Lagi.. hulat na lang jud ko ani.. unta idungan na ug post ang 2nd and 3rd part.. hehe..

      Btw, 3 parts lang ba? Or taas2 pa? Hehe..

      -Takeshi

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    3. I think maabot ni'g pert 5 bai haha
      -author

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  64. wala pa lge sumpay author...heheh excited na kaayo ko
    pero i know worth the wait kaayo ang next chapter...kudos to u bai..nice job!!!

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    1. the admin posted na the second part bai! and thanks :)
      -author

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  65. Kung mahimo pa ning novel kay best-selling jud ni. LOL. The story was well written both in thoughts and structure. Yay. It takes an experience to write a wholesome and awesome story jud diay.

    BTW, musta naman mong duha bai?

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  66. WOW..
    One of the best story that i've read and possibly the best among all.. xD
    Keep it up mr. author.. :D
    I'll make my headway to read the full chapter.. :)

    Pero, masyado akong nahihirapan mag intindi ng vernacular language nyu.. But i think, it's pretty interesting to learn it, right?? xD

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    1. thanks bai! There are translations provided :D and yes you should learn! haha
      -author

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  67. I just want to say how well written your story is and omggggggggggg it was kilig and umm... ouch-ing towards the end (sadly I can relate. Like sobra). This is the first time I actually posted a comment on a story on KM and yes, that's how good your story was given the fact I took time to make a comment. Yeeee!

    I aint a Cebuano (I can speak Aklanon tho) and i totally like your code switching (nice touch tbh). God I'm gonna read the 2nd installment na :)

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      -author

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  68. nice jud kaayo bai.hehehe keep it up!!! ang chapter 3 ha bitaw take ur time bai..anyway goodluck sa midterms

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  69. kani na ang naay pinaka daghan ug comments diri. with all fairness nawala akong biga tungod sa romance and i swear i was all that kilig while reading the story. part 1 pa lang but this has got to be the best story in this blog so far for me. dayum!

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      -author

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  70. Yati ra... Hoi manunulat..! Pagka aninindot ba gayud sa imong gapnod, ang mga lama sa kagahapon ma kaiikag gayud paga basahon, sa pipila sa adlaw,bulan ug tuig nakong subaybay sa mga sugilanon dria kini ra gayud ug ikaw pa usab naka pakomentaryo dri.. Busa karon ako mutindog ug hatagan kag palakpak.. 2thumps up.. Sunod kapitulo na palihog..

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  71. wow bai over a hundred comments.... if this is a movie, talagang certified box office hit....just goes to prove that u really don't need a lot of sex to sell a product....your story made a lot of guys believe in romance again .... sarap ng feeling pag pinapakilig ka ng mahal mo.... pure, unadulterated romance, sorry bai i'm just a hopeless romantic haha.... props to you for a well written story, talagang sunday habit na :) - lbl

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  72. nice to hear a fellow Velezian here. wala na ta nag abot bai. sayang. can relate to the story though. na issue gani mi sa una. hahaha. NSG SBO-SSC love team. we both graduated na nuon.

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  73. What a riveting story! I find it cute and adorable. Weeeeee! Kilig much! Nice lage ang story, I hope this happens to all of those who are still having a hard time finding out their sexual orientation (including me) especially those who are closeted and collected because they're usually the one's left out when everyone else has a partner. Don't lose hope everyone, miracles do happen and true love will always find a way.

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  74. Kana ganing mag smile ka while nag basa... well written gyud... good job sa author
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  75. reading this story again. :) ka nice unta kung ma meet nako si author. naa ra pud ko sa cebu. medyo na inspire ko sa story nga hopefully i would also find that someone.

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  76. Awww. This story made me kilig, knowing na oart one pa lang nababasa ko. Nice one athor!

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  77. Chaar ani gd. Ni basa lng ko blik. Velezian here hahahahahah 😄

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