tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4281076868565332328.post5972554006259462032..comments2024-01-01T10:09:51.626+08:00Comments on Kwentong Malibog Kwentong Kalibugan- Best Pinoy Gay Sex Blog: The Resistance (Part 1)Kwentong Maliboghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13228661905845931379noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4281076868565332328.post-7302858287258096562015-06-08T21:06:54.575+08:002015-06-08T21:06:54.575+08:00And gulo mo pre...pero tingin k imagination m ung ...And gulo mo pre...pero tingin k imagination m ung last part...aus naman kaso nalihis landas m dun s last part....rhomznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4281076868565332328.post-29742036573581142272015-04-14T01:27:34.697+08:002015-04-14T01:27:34.697+08:00Salamat sa review, Memosync!
Binasa ko ng paulit...Salamat sa review, Memosync!<br /><br /><br />Binasa ko ng paulit-ulit ang story na to bago ko ipasa, binalik-balikan at madaming edit ang nangyari. Siguro lang hirap pa ko na i-convey into words ung nasa imagination ko at mag set ng mood, at hindi tumugma sa kung ano mang posibleng ma-imagine ng mambabasa.<br /><br /><br />In this story's case, si Rob ay isang daydreamer na sexually repressed, at dahil don kabado siya at hindi mapalagay sa sarili nya. Nakilala nya si Jessie na inaakala niya'y magiging mabait sa kanya. Pero ang totoong turn ng events ay yung last part kung san nag iba ung personality ni Jessie. Hindi ko nagawang lagyan ng transition yun at i-explain ng maayos.<br /><br /><br /><br />Babasahin ko ung story mo pag may time.ThinSkinnednoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4281076868565332328.post-83687769829145821072015-04-03T14:25:07.580+08:002015-04-03T14:25:07.580+08:00Co-Writer's Review:
Hi ThinSkinned, di ko alam...Co-Writer's Review:<br />Hi ThinSkinned, di ko alam kung dapat ba akong mag comment dahil kagaya mo bagito lang din ako sa pagsusulat, so I will also appreciate if you will take time to review yung story na pinasa ko, and when you do that on your review please put also "Co-Writer's Review" para ma improve ko tong bagong hobby ko. Ang title ng story ko at "Tado", okay going back to your story, i just want to stress this issue<br /><br />- medyo naguluhan ako kasi feeling ko may mga missing part sa story mo, i also experience it when im doing my story, kasi when we write a story ang bilis tumakbo ng imagination natin sa utak natin parang sunod sunod ang pag pasok ng mga ideas, kaya minsan akala natin na encode/ na type na natin sa notes, pero di papala, ang suggestion ko is for you to review your story mga one to two days after you wrote it, kasi kung babasahin mo ito on the same time or day na isinulat mo hindi mo mapapansin yung mga nawawala kasi nga naka register pa rin sa brain mo yung gusto mong mabasa ng readers mo.<br /><br />- next is to take time to narate every part of it, eto ang pinakamahirap sa lahat, kasi ang hirap mag type at the same timeMemosyncnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4281076868565332328.post-90974331420968352132015-03-29T06:13:07.788+08:002015-03-29T06:13:07.788+08:00Ako din naguluhan biglang nag iba ang kwento sa ba...Ako din naguluhan biglang nag iba ang kwento sa bandang tulo... iniisip bakit nag iba ung ugali ng jessie.. tas nasa school na pala si rob.. naguluhan ako hehechinitoprincenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4281076868565332328.post-72107247880223371652015-03-25T17:10:13.663+08:002015-03-25T17:10:13.663+08:00Medyo magulo pero feeling ko imagination mo lang a...Medyo magulo pero feeling ko imagination mo lang ang lahat habang nasa school ka??robinhoodnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4281076868565332328.post-77906783174502334942015-03-24T17:00:09.132+08:002015-03-24T17:00:09.132+08:00haha sabi ko na nga ba magulo eh..tnx na lng sa pa...haha sabi ko na nga ba magulo eh..tnx na lng sa pagbasaThinSkinnednoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4281076868565332328.post-63989816326748499642015-03-22T12:35:07.353+08:002015-03-22T12:35:07.353+08:00ang gulo???ang gulo???winged centaurnoreply@blogger.com