By: John
I have been reading the stories of this blog for the past week and I find it quite interesting indeed. I have stumbled upon this site while I was searching for some readings and I must admit I got hooked into it, to the point that it even lead to some sleepless nights. Well I have had no regrets though.
OK, following the unspoken rule and to help you visualize, allow me to introduce myself. You can call me John, not my real name, but I find a perfect attribution to the name. I am a student in Katipunan, where the eagles fly. I live in a place at Xavierville Ave.. I stand 5 feet and 9.5 inches, I take good care of my body and I go to the gym as often as possible, in fact daily. I also jog to keep my body fit.
Alright I decided to contribute this story of mine which just happened a few hours ago at the time of this writing since I couldn't help but think of it every now and then. I couldn't sleep though so I'd rather share it for everyone's enjoyment.
I met this guy in an online social networking site where guys are looking for guys. Out of boredom I went online for some voyeuristic enjoyment of viewing gorgeous guys' profiles. I received a message from this hot and gorgeous looking guy. To give you a visual, he is a curious combination of the looks of Drew Arellano and Janvier Daily. His muscles are well toned, even the legs (which majority of the gym goers tend to neglect), he said that can be attributed to the results of his Pilates practice. And he has chiseled abs!. He is a good combination of looks and physique, thus an all-in-one package. I couldn't believe that such a gorgeous creature gave me a compliment that I am hot.
OK, following the unspoken rule and to help you visualize, allow me to introduce myself. You can call me John, not my real name, but I find a perfect attribution to the name. I am a student in Katipunan, where the eagles fly. I live in a place at Xavierville Ave.. I stand 5 feet and 9.5 inches, I take good care of my body and I go to the gym as often as possible, in fact daily. I also jog to keep my body fit.
Alright I decided to contribute this story of mine which just happened a few hours ago at the time of this writing since I couldn't help but think of it every now and then. I couldn't sleep though so I'd rather share it for everyone's enjoyment.
I met this guy in an online social networking site where guys are looking for guys. Out of boredom I went online for some voyeuristic enjoyment of viewing gorgeous guys' profiles. I received a message from this hot and gorgeous looking guy. To give you a visual, he is a curious combination of the looks of Drew Arellano and Janvier Daily. His muscles are well toned, even the legs (which majority of the gym goers tend to neglect), he said that can be attributed to the results of his Pilates practice. And he has chiseled abs!. He is a good combination of looks and physique, thus an all-in-one package. I couldn't believe that such a gorgeous creature gave me a compliment that I am hot.
So we exchanged numbers and from then on we exchanged messages through mobile phone, got to know each other and all these tête-à-têtes. So we decided to schedule a meet up and set a scheduled date, which every now and then had to be postponed and rescheduled due to some commitments.
Until last night, he said he was horny, so I said he could come over to my place. He said he's kinda lazy of traveling unless I would fetch him, which he just jokingly said. I was like “this guy is kinda demanding” yet nonetheless I was thinking he's all worth it though. So I agreed to do so at an agreed time, anyway upon checking in Google Map, he is just 5 minutes away from me!
So I cooked pasta with tarragon, thyme, basil, capers, and sun dried tomatoes for him, prepared rye bread toasts to compliment the food. I wanted to make sure that my guest would be happy. So yeah I fetched him from his place, and I saw him and I still couldn't help but get mesmerized by the hotness of this guy.
So we went back to my place, ate the food I cooked. When we were done with the dinner he went directly to my bed and lay there. I laid beside him and started kissing him, which he responded willingly. I felt like there were fireworks in my head- that passionate yet gentle kiss. I started kissing him on his neck, of which he was apprehensive of being kissed as he said he hasn't taken a bath yet. Honestly, call it weird, but i love his smell. So I started kissing him on his nipples, licked it, bit it. I did so as if there is no tomorrow, I couldn't stop doing it until he pushed me down to his abs, lowered me further down to his bulge. Damn it's big. I kept on holding it and decided to unbutton his shorts, hmm white briefs, sexy.
He tried to undressed me and reached for my dick, he was surprised that I wasn't wearing undies, I usually don't. I pulled down his shorts, then his briefs, ohh what a sight to behold. Such a glory to be worshiped. I started licking the head, the shaft, the body of his penis. All I could hear was his muttering of “Uh shit shit shit shit” (for several times)- a signal that he was liking what i was doing. I sucked his balls and i could hear his louder moan of “aaaaahhh” and the fast muttering of “shit shit shit shit”.
Then he pulled me up and started kissing my lips again, he asked if he could fuck me. I said not tonight since I'd like you to come back, at least there would be something to look forward to, for him to fuck me. Then went on top of me and started kissing me on my neck, licked my earlobes (damn i couldn't explain the feeling, i felt like high). My ears are my erogenous zone. He went down to my neck, the next thing I knew he's already biting my nipples, it wasn't gentle, a bit painful but to my surprise it felt good, really good. Then he asked again, please, please, please. I thought, why not? Good thing I had condoms and KY Jelly on my bedside cabinet (I prepared well for instances like these).
So he started putting on the rubber, put on some KY and applied some to my glory hole. He started to get inside me, damn it hurts. I said, “hold on allow me to relax”, until he started to thrust and it felt good.
Then he pulled my legs up, put it on his shoulders, then he thrusted faster. We tried a lot of positions, he seems like an expert. There was one where he asked me to lie on my stomach, then he was on my back on top of me, fucking me at the same time kissing my neck, i could feel his whole upper body on my back. Then he asked me to lie on my back with my feet up high, I could remember my legs were touching his neck, then he had my legs wide open and started kissing me on my lips, my nipples while jacking me off, and fucking me. I didn't know how he made it possible considering the complexity of the position, perhaps his Pilates practice helped. I'm loving Pilates now. Then he knelt with one leg and the other leg extended, so he was drilling me sidewards. Then he asked me to hug him tight on around his neck and not to let go, then lifted me and fucked me. It felt really good, I love the idea of being fucked on the air, so this is what they say as feeling like you're in the clouds, that's a whoppper, ang saya. He put me back to bed very gently, I never felt a thud that I was thrown back, he has good control. I couldn't believe that he was able to carry me, and lift me for quite long, I'm heavy, I'm taller than him, he's just 5' 8”.
Then we had different positions again, he wasn't gentle in fucking me, he was fucking me hard. It's painful but i like it. With the silence of the night we could hear our panting, and the bed playing it's music with each push. I didn't bother even if my neighbors would hear.
Then he stopped, lay down, I asked, are you OK? He said yeah, i got tired, so i asked, do you want me to suck you? He said yes, so took out the rubber, and went back to what I love doing – licking every detail of his manhood, then i heard him said, “I'm coming, malapit na, ayan na, ahh, shit shit shit shit..” Well.. so he exploded in my mouth, it tasted sweet!
But I wasn't done yet so I just jacked off while he was kissing my ears and neck. I loved it. So both of us ended satisfied. He rested for a while, like 15 minutes or so, then he took a shower and went back to bed with me. He said he had to leave. So I assisted him outside and hailed a cab. He showed me his phone when he was already in the cab (probably referring to him that he texted me). When I went back to my room i received several messages from him. One was, “sana nagustuhan mo” and then there was another “sa uulitin” I was like oh hell yea i look forward to seeing you, so I texted him, “dude you were awesome”.
Lucky you! Don't forget to share kung anong nangyayari dun sa "Sa uulitin: nya. Kudos for the story!
ReplyDeletebro, u may also try me. i'm just here in marikina near xavierville.
ReplyDeleteGood good narration. Looking forward to the next story. You are obliged to update us readers.
ReplyDelete-Fighting Maroon! ;)
Nakakarelate ako :)
ReplyDeleteand ang ganda ng story! ;)
keep it up!!!
-tamaraw-
Cute :)
ReplyDeleteang gwapo nung model??
ReplyDeleteguys cno sya?? pki sabi naman yung name nya!!
-vin
Kalibog puta haha. Sana may kasunod na agad.
ReplyDelete-tomas
syntax and diction shows he isn't from the university in Katipunan. Oh well. thanks for posting poser. :) Peace!
ReplyDeleteMali grammar mo teh. "show" hindi shows dahil mutliple ang subjects mo LoL wag ka magmaganda kung ikaw nman mismo ay palpak hahaha feelingerang bakla
DeleteFYI PO SA NAG CORRECT. SUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT. WHEN USING AND, THE VERB MUST FOLLOW THE QUANTITY OF THE FIRST SUBJECT. MAG CO-CORRECT KA NA NGA LANG PALPAK PA.
Deleteou nga !!!
DeleteANG TANGA NUNG NAGCORRECT !!! NAGAARAL KA PO BA???
BOOOOMMM!!!! ANSAKIT NUN!! TANGA KA??
FEELINGERANG TANGA!!!
Talagang palpak kayo dahil you are not one of the students in Katipunan where the eagles fly daw. Duh! Kaya nga sinulat ng author yung story niya in English (which is not necessary) para patunayan na smart siya kay sa inyo. Duh!
DeleteLAHAT KAYO PALPAK. BAKLANG CRAB NA NAGHIHILAHAN PABABA. KADIRI. ANYWAY, para sa arreneow stud, ang landi mo te! lupon ng mga baklang conyo-kuno sa katipunan. fyi, actually conyo is a spanish word meaning = mura like shit.
DeleteCoño is a spanish slang word which means vagina.
DeleteIgualmente Doug Marasigan y por pabor calla te. Usted no tienes modales. Cabron! Maricon! Pa Spanish Spanish ka pa para sabihin me lahing Zobel de Ayala wala naman alam. Usted no tienes cerebro. Mentalmente enfermo!
DeleteIm coming? Ano ibig sabihin niya? Peace author.
ReplyDeleteBoring! The story is very predictable with no twist. It would be nice, if the author narrated his story about his first gay sex experience or any circumstances that lead him to discover about the truth of his sexual orientation rather than just simply narrating his promiscuous sexual activity. Anyway, I'll still give two stars to this story for the gratuitous squirting of seminal fluid into the author's mouth orifice. Huh! What can I say?
ReplyDeleteThere should be no comma between "nice" and "if".
Delete"led" not "lead"
There should be no "about" in "discover about the truth".
Also.., "truth about" not "truth of"
DeleteThe pronoun "I" should always be written in capital letter when writing a sentence. Any third grade student knows this basic English rule. However, the author in this story typed the pronoun "I" in small letter several times.
DeleteThis sentence "the bed playing it's music with each push..." Should be written as "the bed playing its music..." Remember "it's" is the contraction of it is while "its" is a possessive pronoun.
This sentence "he tried to undressed me..." should be written as "he tried to undress me..".
Hay naku, pareho lang yung critic at ang author mali mali rin yung English nila. Ang sarap talagang pag-umpugin ang mga ulo nila. Buti pa Tinagalog nyo na lang.
Haaaay...
DeleteMga perfectionist na bakla...
Sobrang liit lang na pagkakamali, kelangan talagang ipamuka? Bakit kayo ba perpekto?!
Akala nyo ba, kahanga hanga ang pagcorrect nyo ng mga errors s grammar? Hahah... nakakatawa kayo!!!
E try nyo kayang magsulat ng storya nyo, tingnan natin kung kaya nyong panindigan yang mga criticisms nyo... :-P
Lol. I'll be back for you writer when I get buffed up :D
ReplyDelete-Isko from Katips
Isko everywhere. Lol I will also come after him after my workouts. Haha!
Delete-Fighting Maroon
I'm just wondering why people can't accept constructive criticism. I understand that all these negative comments really hurt the ego of this author since he is a student from one of those fancy schools in Katipunan. Being a student in an elite school doesn't mean that you are always perfect. Learning is a life long process and you always learn a lesson from your past mistakes. This story doesn't only need proofreading but it also requires substantive editing. Honestly, I think the author doesn't have the flair in Literary Art. Maybe writing stories is not his cup of tea. However, I'm pretty sure he is good in Fellatio. A mode of sexual expression that can be politely defined as the art of pleasing a man's penis. Hahaha. Oops! Please excuse my English grammar because I'm not one of those students in Katipunan where the eagles fly.
DeleteBakit perfectionist mga tao dito? alam ko sensual binabasa ko hindi essay writing contest o kung ano pa man na kailangan maging perpekto. Sapat na na naiintindihan yung message ng story.
ReplyDeletehey bro. nice story. saan ka sa Xavierville? maybe we could meet up to ;)
ReplyDeleteYour story sounds gentle and wild. I'm looking forward for next chapter. Don't mind those pathetic critics. You cannot please all horny gays here.
ReplyDeleteWow! Is this story some kind of exercise to check if ones grammar is wrong? Please just enjoy the story. You're in this site for pleasure, not bashing on other people's stories.
ReplyDeleteTo the author:
The story wasn't so adventurous but all-in-all it was pretty OK. Don't let these fools stop you from writing. Looking forward to the next one. ;)
-R
Di ko alam may convention pla ng mga may PhD ng English grammar dito hahaha sige nga submit kayo ng story na perfect grammar down to the usage to your usage of articles tignan natin! haven't you heard if your a writer you can have grammatical error without critics bashing you for it. (sigh )the typical crab mentality!
ReplyDeleteKudos! Keep it up kalibog amp haha
ReplyDelete-cardinals
To the bekis bashing the eagle's grammar: i bet you're virgins and the only action you've ever experienced is with your right hand. As it seems, you have so much time filtering the little, if not non-existent, grammatical errors. Go out, flirt and have a life (not necessarily in that order).
ReplyDelete-archer
I stay along katipunan! Hit me up ;) haha
ReplyDeletebe communicative,mga beks! It's the intelligility of the language that is m0re imp0rtant in this kind of discourse.
ReplyDeletehey dude, nice story. where are you at xavierville? maybe you could let me in too? ;)
ReplyDeleteLOL! Nalaman lang na taga-ADMU nilait na. God! It's sad. You guys need sex. Tsk tsk.
ReplyDelete- Lion
hoy mga baklang to ang kikitid mgisip! kung mkapanglait ng grammar, wagas! ang tunay na kahulugan ng kwento ang focus dito, di ang pagkakalahad, OK? gamit2 dn ng utak pag may time ha?
ReplyDeletePuro correction lang ang mababasa mo dito sa comments...tawa much lang...well I should salute you mr. Author good job....I can't wait to read the next story...
ReplyDeletethe story is nice & beauTiful
ReplyDeleteFor the auThor:
job welL doNe
wish that you post again mOre story
When arrows fly eagles die.!!
ReplyDelete-Green Archer.
It's fun to shoot eagles with your old fashioned slingshot and watch them going into free fall.
DeletePutang Ina nyo! Nag enjoy na kau nanlait pa kau!
ReplyDeleteAno ito?english class?wag ng mag pagalingan mga bex..basahin nalang ang istorya at mag enjoy..kaloka kau!
ReplyDeleteKung nakakaloka ang mga comments dito e di wag mong basahin baka sa mental hospital pa ang bagsak mo niyan. Madramang bakling.
Deletedoug marasigan... maxiado mu naman inaapi kaming mga tga ateneo... i dont see any reason na gawin un..
ReplyDeletekasi naman it doesny equate na pag taga ateneo e magaling mag english.. pwede pa siguro magaling maginarte sa pagsasalita.... i have nothing against the institution itself but with those students who feel that they are compelled to speak english if they go to that school... crap... napakatrying hard naman... lalo na pag nasa banapple... mga feelingera na pa english english.... its a pain in the ass to hear na mali mali grammar... much more to read....
ReplyDeletenose bleed.XD
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