By: Matt
I’ve been following the site for about a few months now, and like most readers, I also felt the urge to share. Before I start, a few disclaimers first (we’ve got to get this out of the way before we get to the juicy stuff). First, I am not a writer, to tell you honestly, aside from a few college papers, this is the first literary (for the lack of a better word) work I am going to do/did. So, I hope you guys forgive me for whatever the outcome of this short story is/ will be. There is always room for improvements, right? Second, What I am about to share is truth, except for a FEW additions just to make the reading material more interesting. Third, I know its futile, but if you are younger than 18, I would like to request that you hit the “back” button. Those things out of the way, let’s move on to what we really came here for.
My story happened a good 5 or 6 years ago, around 2006 or 2007, and I was 20 then. A brief background about myself: I’m what you call half and half, half of this and half Filipino (but I was born and raised here, so I do have a good grasp of our native tongue). I’m pretty tall (6’2”), fair skinned, buzz cut hair, I am neither muscled nor fat, I’m just in between. I don’t know how I look, I certainly don’t scare people away, but I also don’t grace the covers of magazines. So, back to the story, (sorry, I keep on side swiping), so yeah 6 years ago, I was still in college then.
So as I was about to enter my university when my mom called:
Mom: “Mike, (not my real name) Ria’s just gave birth! He’s a 7-pound baby boy! He’s so cute!” (So who’s Ria? Ria is my cousin, one of my closest of many.)
Me: “Aww mom, I can’t rush to see you guys there, I’m about to take my calculus finals! I’ll rush right after!”
Mom: “We’ll see you then!”
After hanging up the phone, I quickly rushed to my exam room and took one hellish calculus exam.
During the entire duration of the exam, I couldn’t concentrate! All I could think of was seeing the baby. After 5 hours worth of excruciating questions, I hopped onto my car and rushed to the hospital.
So, being an idiot in math, but forced to take calculus (weren’t we all required?) preparing for such an exam was not an easy feat! 2 weeks before the said finals (well of course, together with other subjects), I skipped all hedonistic activities, I didn’t party (yeah, I know right, how cliché – a college student who loves to party), I abstained from alcohol, going out, having sex (its not that I get some on a regular basis! Haha!) and of course the standard prerequisite of every hot blooded man, masturbating. 2 weeks before the said exam, I was always at our local café drowning myself in caffeine, studying until my eyes hurt until the wee hours. So, again, going back, before my calculus finals, if I remember it correctly, I haven’t released semen for the past 5 or 6 days.
Rushing through our traffic streets, I finally arrived at the hospital after 1 hour. After parking my car, I was famished so I went to the nearest café, got myself a bowl of pasta, a large iced tea and some to go bread for my cousin. I quickly devoured my little bowl of pasta, I went on my way to the hospital. I’m not so familiar with this hospital so I asked the cute nurses in their tight (why is it that nurses’ uniforms are either too tight or too loose? Just wondering!) white uniform where room ABC was. So being so helpful after a few minutes I was at my cousin’s room. The room was packed, cousins, ants and uncles, and friends were there and they were eating, so I had to dig in again! (Who’s to complain when they get free food right?) So pleasantries were exchanged and when the clock struck 7pm, I went to the nursery viewing area (I was alone since everybody had their chance to see little baby boy already). As I got there, a beautiful nurse held my little nephew near to the glass panel so I could take pictures. It took me about 15 minutes to take pictures and ogle the cuteness that was my nephew and afterwards I went back to my cousin’s room. When I got there, I felt the urge to pee but I wasn’t able to because her husband was taking a bath! So I excused myself and went to the nearest nurses’ station to ask for the nearest public toilet. At this point, I would like to tell you what I was wearing that day. I distinctly remember I was wearing black board shorts (Without underwear, that’s the only way to wear board shorts!) and a red shirt. The nurses directed me to the toilet, which was, I think, at the other end of the maze-like building. I made my way, took several turns and realized that I was somewhat lost so I asked another nurse (I think he was a nurse, coz he was wearing white) if he could point me to the bathroom. As I was asking for directions, I couldn’t help but admire the handsome fellow in front of me - A few inches shorter than I am, dark skinned, buzz cut just like me, white pearly teeth, and a bulge accented by his tight uniform, he somewhat reminded me of the lead guy from the latest step up movie. A bit latino looking but still Filipino. I felt a buzz on my groin, an all too familiar feeling.
Me: “Sir, would you point me to the nearest toilet, I asked a nurse a few minutes ago, and mentioned that it was around this area” Slightly fidgeting due to my enlarging bladder and to conceal my growing dick (remember I wasn’t wearing underwear! A choice I kinda regretted at that time)
Nurse: laughing a little bit “Sir, it is really hard to find, there’s no signage pointing to it, just a sign on the door. It’s here up this small hallway sir. Ill show you, I think I need to relieve myself as well”
What the fuck did I just hear? He wants to join me inside the toilet! Its not that its weird but, it was giving me crazy ideas! So we walk a few meters and..
Nurse: “Here you go sir, After you!” Opening the door for me.
Me: “aah, ee, thanks!”
I entered the toilet, which is cramped by the way, just 1 urinal and 1 normal toilet. I went to the normal toilet and he went to the urinal. I unfastened my shorts and let out my dick. Which was so hard by this time! So now, I had a dilemma, I couldn’t pee coz I was rock hard! I could hear him peeing and from the corner of my eye, I could see him looking my way. I turned to look his way and he smiled at me.
Nurse: “Sir, you can’t pee while you’re hard, your penis wont allow it”
Me: “Really?”
Nurse: “Yes, here let me give you a hand”
With that, his cock still out of his fly, he held my dick and started slowly jerking me. I let out a soft moan out of sheer pleasure. I told him, “how did you know, I swing that way?” He answered, “I don’t know, I just felt it.” After stroking me several times, he said, “Sir we have to hurry with this coz I’m still on duty.” He didn’t even let me respond as he dived for my cock, his hot mouth enveloping my hard member! Up and down his expert cock made me feel like a king. I held his head and played with his hair. This went for awhile but I didn’t last long, as I haven’t emptied my balls for the past days, so exploded my hot cum into the walls of the toilet. I was in heaven! I asked him if he wanted me to return the favor, he said, “Its ok sir, that was enough for me, besides I’m on duty.” With that, we exchanged a short lustful kiss and he said goodbye and left the toilet.
I cleaned up, dressed up and left as well. I had one question in mind though, “What was his name?”
THE END
Cute.
ReplyDeleteHaha.. funny ending.. having sex w/out even getting to know each other.. it's quite normal nman n sa karamihan!
ReplyDeletepilit mag.english
ReplyDeleteumpisa pa lang di sure kung do or did ang gagamitin.
be urself n lang d ganyan n u keep on fooling others and urself as well.
i'd say the author did well on this one. as for you who commented na "pilit mag english", speak for your self. at the very least, the author tried. next time, be more rational in giving your thoughts before commenting. you're the one sounding "pilit". or maybe.. you just didn't understand his words of choice. hit the dictionary! :)
DeleteFor the author, well done. Quick, funny and worth reading :)
Sobra naman magcomment. Its just a constructive criticism. Choice of english kasi hindi bagay. If u started english, then construct ur story all in english. Also, too much unecessary intro and using some words which is not relevant, makapag english lang.
DeleteTanga mo...kaya do or did kase do= habang ginagawa nya palang...yung did kapag tapos na...Habang ginagawa nya I do....para habang binabasa mo...did na yung babasahin mo...Mag aral ka kase mag sulat bobo
Deletemakatanga wagas.
Deletekelan pa naging tama ang 'to did'. bobo lng. isip isip pg my time ahh.
After reading the story, I agreed that there are some errors here base on my opinion that really defied the basic English Rule. However, these are just minor. If this is a TOEFL (Test Of English As Foreign Language) exam in the Essay Section where the examInee needs to write a minimum words of at least 200, I think think the author will be able to pass it with descent grade or better. Stories that are written in perfect English are mostly fictional accounts because they are created by professional writers and edited by their editors. I like to read stories written by nonprofessional writers because they can give you a true account of their life experiences. The author of this story did a fine a job but there is still room for improvements as what he said.
DeleteThe above word "descent" should be written as "decent." My apology for typographical error.
Delete"am going to do/did" was meant to be an option for TWO verbs. The first one being the verb phrase "am going to do" and the second one being the one word verb "did". Pinapili lang niya yung reader ng mas appropriate the verb. Tama naman ginawa niya.
DeleteCommon Sense pleaaaase! Yung iba kasi dito napaka-reactive eh. React ng react kagad.
seryoso pag tatalunan tlga ang grammar dito haha
Deletecollocation: : :
ReplyDeleteas long you their is understanding of the thought of the text regardless of perfect grammar ok na yan...
2 da critic:
u observe foreign films and hear if they perfectly use the language well.compare:
Puta. Sakit mo sa bangs.
DeleteCute :)
ReplyDeleteNatawa ako sa nagcomment na 'pilit mag.english'. Di ka lang sanay magbasa ng english teh. hahaha. sa dami ng pwede i-comment ung do/did talaga - which is perfectly fine. Hindi daw kasi sure kung ako ang tama... WTF. Di po un ganun ate. ginagamit talaga un minsan para mas madaling maintindihan ng mga bobong katulad mo. Eh kaso di mo pa rin nantindihan. Malala kpa sa bobo. Kairita ka.Bawal po magcomment ang tanga ha? Hindi matatawag na constructive criticism pag galing sa tanga.
ReplyDeletebakit kaya ang dmaing nagco comments ng destructive criticisms instead na constructive one...kagaya sa mga chatooms, kapag may nakahubad jan..dami nilang negative feedback na malaki ang tiyan, maitim ang singit, ugat ugat ang kamay..bakit di sila na lang ang mag cam di ba/..kagaya ng author, bakit yong english critics na lang ang sumulat para perpekto ang babasahin dito..
ReplyDeletesaludo ako sa iyo..sa paglantad mo ng estorya mo..i am not a prefect person pero naintindihan ko naman ang takbo ng estorya mo...bobo kasi ako eh...
Cool.... Lang kayo wag naman kayong ganyan sa author kc lahat ng tao may pagkakamali. Kahit nga teacher nag kakamali alam nyo wag nalang kayong mag comment kong nd naman ka gandahan ang isinusulat niya sa comment... Then dont u ever say anything for one person coz we onli a person to have a mestake by the way im enjoy while reading.....
ReplyDeleteano daw....?
Delete???
Deleteoo... tagalugin na lng natin next time hahaha
Deleteahaha kakatawa lang.
ReplyDeletewhat do u xpect s readers i-baby ang auth0r at puro gud fidbaks lng sbihn, anu un umasa xa n like ng lahat gawa nya
Ngayon naniniwala na ako Kung bakit sa States they regarded nurses as everyday heroes kasi daw they are not only caring and compassionate but they also do the extra mile by taking care of your sexual needs. Hahaha.
ReplyDeleteHoy magbasa nalang kau., nagrereklamo pa kau kung ano ano pa qng explain nyo.
ReplyDeleteAno ba habol nyo dito? Ung kwento or maghanap ng mali sa grammar? Kabadtrip ung makapag correct feeling perfect! Kung may problema kayo sa grammar ng iba mas maganda siguro wag na lang kayo magbasa or siguro kayo na lang magkwento pero dapat tama lahat ha! kung maka epal lang! Kayo na ang magaling magsulat.
ReplyDeleteHindi ko na binasa! Namumutla nako :))) Tagalog nlng sa susunod para exciting. Ramdam agad ang tension :))) hahaha
ReplyDeletethis story was well written, almost like my fil-am friends in Cali on how to share their thoughts. kudos to the author-nim
ReplyDeleteim a nurse btw.. san kayang ospital ito? malamang private to not to mention it happened night coz mukang walang tao and they did it freely. i dunno if i will be jealous coz mabilis ang sex action. ako kasi my duty is in a public or government hospital so it means maraming tao & sa ER pa ako nakabased not in ward. wala naman dito private rooms. well kanya kanya namang paraan yan ng malilibog na doctor, nurse, patients or relative ng patient. sa experience ko, may mga nagpaparamdam rin na cuties mapa babae or lalaki na pasyente or bantay, may minsan nga nakakatsansing pa saken, may humihingi ng number ko and vice versa pero sa akin, when i asked for their number, in a professional basis para di obvious kunwari kukumustahin ko sila after 1 week kung gumaling na ba sila.. so far, 2 of my patients na nakainuman ko na and counting hehe.. dapat nga 5 na, kung di lang ako nagkaproblema sa bahay recently.. sa loob ng ER, may mga nahihimas rin ako na burat well sabagay di naman sadya.. pero may isa akong experience na di ko malilimutan. i might share it soon kaya lang baka mabitin lang kayo...: )
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