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Sunday, August 17, 2014

Cebu Coffee Shops (Part 3)

By: Ram

In the morning, I woke up with a throbbing in my head. Jon was already awake, half naked and sitting with his back to the bed. I cleared my throat and he faced me.
“You can shower and borrow some of my clothes before we go and get your car. I’ll be in my parents’ room, showering.” He said, going outside.
“Don’t. I’m not showering or borrowing your clothes. I’ll go outside and wait for you while you get ready.” I stood up and waited for him downstairs. I recalled the events that happened the past night and I cursed myself. What the fuck was I thinking? Did I really say that? Another friendship broken.

He came down fresh but he was looking glum and drained and I thought it was because he was still angry and pissed at me. We drove in silence but he stopped in front of Starbucks IT. “Breakfast before anything else.” He said going out of the car.
“Jon, bai, I’ll walk nalang to my car. Thanks a lot bai.” I said as I closed the door to his car.
“Ram. Breakfast.” He said sternly. I complied because I didn’t want him to get angry at me even more. We ate in silence, like strangers all over again.

“Jon,” I cleared my throat and he looked at me.
“Bai, if it’s about last night, kalimti nalang to.” (Forget about it) he said.
“Bai no, I can’t forget about the shitty things I did last night. Sorry kaayo bai.” (I’m so sorry) I apologized again.
“Ok ra lagi bai, let’s drop it na. You were just drunk.” (It’s really ok)
“I can’t drop it bai because there were things that I said that needs to be explained! And yes I was drunk pero the things I said were…” I snapped at him. The passersby eyed us but didn’t linger. There weren’t a lot of people in Starbucks and we were sitting outside.
“Let’s not talk here.” He stood up and walked to his car. I followed. He started the engine and drove us to where I left my car last night. We were silent until we’ve reached the parking lot.

“Bai, kapoya na bai oy (It’s all too tiring already). No more excuses, here it goes bai.” I said and swallowed hard on my seat. I was looking at him and he was trying not to look back at me; confusion and axiety written all over his face.
“What you heard last night was true bai. I like you. I fucking like you kaayo (very much) bai and I know you can never like me back so it sucks to the core. I’m sorry if I got wasted last night but what you did was really painful for me but of course I can’t blame you, all I have to blame is myself. Bai I’m sorry I can’t stop myself. That’s why I’ve been trying to keep my distance from you but I found out that I can’t get away bai. Fuck oy I’m so sorry for making things awkward for you bai.” I said and started to cry. The car was silent so I decided it was time to get out. That time he didn’t stop me. I didn’t want to look back, I tried hard not to look back. But I was thinking, Please call me. Please call me. Please call me back. But he didn’t. I drove home with tears clouding my eyes.

School continued and avoiding him was still hard. The teasing continued but a week before the second semester finals, I blew up. My barkada and I were on our way to our next class which was a room next to the class of Jon and his barkada. They just got out of their class and the two parties saw each other, so the teasing between Rhea and I ensued. It was alright, I learned to ignore them. But Jon decided to go overboard this time. He dragged Rhea by the hands and grabbed mine too. He then forced our hands together but I pulled away and when I did, he playfully pushed me towards Rhea who seemed uncomfortable already. I told him to stop but he kept on pushing me and lastly, he pushed me hard that I almost stumbled on Rhea but I managed to maneuver and avoided her but I landed with my ass on the ground.

“Bai what the fuck is wrong with you bai? Can you fuck off already?” I snapped at him. My friends helped me get up.
“Sorry bai, it’s all a joke.” Jon apologized.
“You think everything’s a joke Jon, fuck you oy.” I barked.
“Unsa’y problema nimo bai? (What’s your problem?) It was all a joke, calm down bai.” He said, pushing my chest.
“Kayata nimo oy, sobra na ka ha!” (What the fuck dude. You’re going overboard!) I exclaimed and landed a punch on his face. He threw a punch at me and hit me on the cheek. Our friends managed to hold us back before anymore damage could have been done. Both of us were struggling to break free and I saw that his nose was bleeding, I felt blood on my lips too. Our barkadas separated to try and clean our wounds before someone ran to the student affairs officer and report the incident.

After that, the teasing stopped and I could feel the tension between his barkada and mine every time we ran into each other between classes. After that, my feelings for him changed. Summer passed by quickly and before we knew it, I was a second year student and he was a third year.

Things between us began to soften up and one day, we caught each other’s eyes and he smiled at me. I smiled back. The feelings that I thought changed went back to how they were before and I cursed myself for that. But I thought, hey since we’re not that close anymore maybe it’s easier for me to not notice this feeling. Boy was I wrong.

One Saturday night, I was invited to a friend’s debut and when I showed up there, he was there too. Fate decided to play with us because we were seated on the same table; he was sitting across me. After the program, there was a DJ and the partying continued. There was a lot of dancing and grinding and alcohol so pretty much everyone was having fun. I didn’t drink too much because I was driving home and after a while, I decided to sit out the next song.

I was just observing from my table when Jon walked towards me, with two shots of tequila in hand. He gave one to me. It was the last one I had for the night.
“Musta bai?” (How are you?) he said.
“Ok ra bai, struggling but surviving.” I replied, “You? How’s third year life?” I asked.
“So tiring bai. The struggle is real gyud oy haha!” he said and it’s like nothing changed between us. We talked the rest of the night away but he kept on drinking while I kept on refusing. By 3am, he was drunk enough to walk in a wobble.
“Ok that’s it, I’m driving you home bai.” I told him and he didn’t protest. I helped him inside my car and drove to his house.

“Bai, can I crash in your place tonight bai? No one’s at home man gud and I don’t think our yayas will open the gate for us.” He said and I thought for a while, drunk person + alone with him in the bedroom + crazy feelings for the drunk guy = not a good idea, I told myself but he was pleading; there was pain in his eyes so I had no choice.

I helped him out of the car and up the stairs to my bedroom, making sure that we were quiet.
“Bai, you can change into my clothes bai.” I said and helped him out of his clothes and into mine. He was silent all throughout that time.
“Sleep on the bed, I’ll sleep on the floor bai.” I told him as we sat on the floor. I stood up to try and make a bed for me on the floor but he held my arm.
“Bai, you can sleep next to me.” He said.
“No bai, it’s ok. I can sleep-”
“Ram, tupad ta.” (Ram, sleep beside me) he said and I had no choice, his grip on my arm was strong. So we lay in bed, side by side. I turned to him but his eyes were closed. I wasn’t able to sleep, I just kept on staring at the ceiling.

A few minutes after, he said, “Ram?”
“Yeah?”
“I’m sorry.” He said and sat up. I sat up and faced him.
“You don’t have to be. It’s ok bai, you did the same thing to me so I’m just paying you back.” I said but he shook his head.
“For everything bai. For all the pain I caused you.” Shit, is he for real? I thought.
“Bai, don’t worry. Time heals and I have forgiven you. Now, let’s sleep na bai.” I was about to lie back down but he did something. He grabbed my face with both of his hands and brought his lips to mine. I kissed him back but I soon realized what was happening. I pushed him away.

“Bai, what’s worng with you?” I whispered to him.
“Ram, I’m so sorry Ram.” He buried his face on his hands and began crying. I hugged him until he stopped.
“Ram I’m so sorry Ram. That night, when you told me you liked me, I don’t know what was going on. It happened all too fast. Everything seemed all too real for me and I guess I got scared bai. I’m a fucking mess bai.” There was silence as he tried to touch my face.
“I know it’s too late but Ram… I like you too.” He said and all the pain and wounds he caused me seemed to stitch and heal at that moment. But I stopped myself.

“Bai.” I said but he kissed me on the lips again. This time I gave in. Our hands began to explore each other but I told him to stop.
“It’s too fast bai. I don’t want it like this.” I whispered to him and he nodded, kissing me on the lips.
So we just lay there, in each other’s arms and fell asleep.

I woke up to his lips on mine. “Good morning.” He smiled. I smiled back.
I was about to get up when he grabbed my arm and wrapped me in an embrace.
“Can we stay like this for a while?” he whispered and again, I complied.

We stayed like that until 2pm, when our stomachs began to grumble.

School was different. It became better. My smile became wider whenever we bumped into each other in between classes, we had secret meetings in Mango Square especially when we had the same breaks and we went to school and went home together. Our friends asked us what was up but we only told them that we got close. They didn’t speculate anymore.

“Ram, let’s study out bai!” He texted me one Saturday morning, a week before midterms.
“Sure! Where man?” I quickly replied.
“Any idea where? Kana’ng near lang sa ato’ng house.” (A place near our house)
“Country mall bai!” I said.
“Boang! Haha how about Starbucks in Oakridge?” He asked.
“Sounds great!” I replied.
“Ok, get ready na”
“Pick me up?” I asked him.
“Actually…” he replied.
“What?”
“Look out your window.” When I received this text, my heart jumped. I went to my window and opened the curtains. There I saw, the bastard smiling widely at me. I can’t help but smile back. My phone rang.
“Pagdali na!” he said, still smiling at me.
“You’re crazy you know that?” I replied.
“I know. I’m crazy for you, you ugly bed monster.” Fuck he was so cute and I died a little when he said that. I rolled my eyes and got ready.

We spent the whole day studying in Starbucks and there were times when I’d catch him gawking at me and then he’d just smile shyly. There weren’t a lot of people especially 4pm onwards so both of us became touchy and we didn’t care. He even held my hand under the table, catching me off guard and when I looked at him he was just smiling and continued reading his book. I didn’t let go.

I don’t know what we were but I think we both silently agreed that we were something; there was something special between us. But things never last forever.

And it’s something I learned the hard way.

To be continued. As I’ve said, a lot happened between Jon and I haha

149 comments:

  1. Haixt nakaka inspired sarap ulit ulitin sulit ang isang linggong pag hihintay.. kaso isang linggo na naman para sa susunod... huhuhu.. Mr. Author ang galing galing nyoh po salamat po sa pag share ng kwento nyo and libre pa hehehehe.. Mr. Author may kasunod na po buh ito??

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    1. thanks bai! yes bai, I'm trying to finalize part 4 na :)
      -author

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    2. LAST PART na ng part 4 uy ???

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  2. Even though the two of you did not end up together, it was still a good experience for the both of you, in my opinion. Hope to meet you two here sa Cebi. Next part na beh, napul.an na ko cgeg huwat pero atik ra, haha. :-)

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    1. haha thanks bai! :)
      -author

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    2. Mr. Author, can you please make it a bit longer next time? Please?

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  3. Hahaiz, relate much man pud q ani.

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  4. More! Can't get enough of your story. Captured the real emtions. #happythoughts

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  5. Oh wow. That was... wow. Wow. WOOOW. Now i have another week to wait for the next chapter hahaah (but I prolly wont be able to read it right away. I'll be out of town somewhere--idk if there's data coverage there).

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    1. And i just realized how embarrassing my grammar is on this comment. My apologies, kind sir.

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    2. thanks bai! hahahah it's not embarrassing at all hahaha :)
      -author

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    3. I haven't really slept pa kasi so yeah... idk what i was thinking (posting comments versus working) hahahaha. But seriously, I'm kinda scared about the next chap, and i have a feeling I'm crying Niagara falls on it. Kinda.

      And oh, no clue bout it but good luck on your exams :)

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  6. Ram i can relate to ur stories...it also happenned to me before...my best friend and i experience the same. But sad to say were separated now. I lost my bestfriend and i lost my first love!
    Hope it wont happen to you!

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    1. umm no spoilers bai, just stay tuned and see for yourself ahaha
      -author

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    2. Your making me hooked to your stories bai...great job! You bring back my excitement!

      Jayson!

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  7. Mag hulat na sad ko ug another week para sa next chapter hahaii !!

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    1. haha the struggle of life bai hahaha
      -author

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  8. This story never fails to satisfy me! It's so cute and adorable that the 'kilig' factor never gets to stop from touching hearts. Now I'm a real fan of the #RamJon couple! Haha. :) Again, one of the greatest stories I've read, EVER! Kudos, sir Author! :)

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    1. wow thanks bai! really appreciate it :)
      -author

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    2. Greatest stories ever read talaga? Great as in brokeback mountain kind of thing?

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  9. Ahhh choya oy :)) taga TC mo bai?? part 4 plsssss :))

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    1. thanks bai and no bai :)
      -author

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    2. Velez mn gud. hahaha...PERO Raaaaaaaam, i soooo love ur story... the series.

      Ram, if u're good reading Tagalog, basaha ang "The Fall Back." It's a 10-year love story. I have a strong feeling ng u and Jon are really meant for each other. xeyt memeng, iriiiiing meooow

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    3. Taga tc ko bro! Tc sad ka? Hehehe :D

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    4. Hi bai! Tc represent! :-)

      -ry

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    5. @juan lolo-where man ang "The Fall Back", here in this blog?

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  10. It's all my fault ram that's why were seperated now...during that time... i still remember were just a normal teenager...we've been together for 2 years as buddy (bff)...just one night it happenned..we can't explained...until such time were more than as couple...were both in cloud nine during that time...just one day i just thought this is so wrong..this is not who am i... I broke with him...even though it's hard for me...i don't have a choice during that time bcoz im confuse...i cause a lot of pain with him...its so sad but it's all my fault!

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    1. No i'm not jon...i just relate to his stories...im looking with my bestfriend who are very mad with me...i hope his okay!

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    2. It's me Jayson!

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    3. Very bad grammar dude...extremely bad. I left Cebu. Ram and I had to part ways. It was hard but it had to happen. Ram, sorry bai. I was confused. Up until now bai, i am still confused about what happened to us and how we got there. I can still remember the last time we saw each other. I can still remember our quality time sa Bo's and sa Coffee Bean... take care bai. You will always have a special place in my heart. I am so thankful that i bumped into this site.

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  11. Oh My Ram! Yours is the only story na inaabangan ko dito since I started reading articles/stories here in KM. You never fail me giving my first ever KUDOS here in KM for a superb writer like you.. hahahha.. dami ko ng sinabi..but the main point here is that you make me crazy waiting for each part of the story you publish every week and expecting to read the part 4 ASAP, ASAP since you just said that you'll be having a tough week..hahah (demanding??) Bisaya here also but not really good with the dialect...Will be in Cebu before end of 2014 or 1st quarter of 2015.. hope to meet you Ram and Jon maybe..:)))))))))))))


    AWESOME!

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    1. I'm flattered bai hahaha wow thanks a lot gyud bai, never knew our story could have this effect haha
      -author

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    2. nice man gud inyong story. cant wait for the part 4. HAHA! see you guys soon maybe.;-)

      Lee

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  12. Bai your stories feel so good to read na ok ra if I wait for a week to read another chapter! It hurts like fuck bai pero you just learn to move on, I guess/hope you've moved past the pain :-)

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    1. hahah thanks kaayo bai, patience is a virtue gyud bai hahaha it fucking hurts gyud but well it's true time heals all wounds but as for me, I'm not really sure yet bai
      -author

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  13. Hi, Author! You never disappoint me for publishing such "makes me wet" scenes and I was expecting for more intimate part though. Nevertheless, waiting for the story the whole day without sleeping on my rest day is worth it! I love Ram's role even more for showing a bitchy yet reserved character. Kanang mamiga sa saktong lugara without dropping the crown. Adto man ko puhon sa Bo's Raintree Mall basin maka kita pud ko sg akon Jon didto. Bo's Fullybooked at Ayala is my place actually. Kudos!

    - candice -

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    1. thanks bai! hahaha and kinda shy man ko bai mu share in detail sa intimate parts namo hahaha thanks a lot again :)
      -author

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  14. Ram bai...you are great telling ur stories...im very ashamed with my self...coz i dont have a balls to stand with our relationship....i miss him but there's no turning back for me...i hope his okay! Forgive me my bestfriend....i will always love you!

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  15. Bai, kahinanglan na gyud ta magkita! Hahaha. Shets uy! Go lang ng go!!!! How's midterms by the way? Grabeh sige kog huwat tibuok adlaw.

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    1. hahahaha hide and seek ta bai hahaha thanks bai, kapoy midterms oy napuga ang utok bai
      -author

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    2. I gotta feeling you aced it bai. Hahaha. Pero bitaw, you truly have a talent in writing. This is what I look forward to every weekend gyud bai. Imung stories. Pariha pa gyud tag mga tambayan. Feel nako kita nako ninyo specially sa Oakridge Starbucks. Hahaha.

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  16. Hope you also reading this site....please forgive me.... You still my bestfriend...even though you hate me...Im still your bestfriend!

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  17. Mamatay ko sa kakilig! nahurot akong energy sa sigeg ligid ligid sa overwhelming nga kilig wahaha! Cheers to the author :)

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    1. hahaha kuyawa bai but thanks! hahahaha
      -author

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  18. Your always telling me ' im your pangarap...wala kna hahanapin pa basta ksama mo ako' wer you bff?

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  19. I really miss you bff...the way you telling me im special...the way you telling me your very lucky to have me...the way you treat me as your prince...the way you telling me that you love me more than anyone else...more than that, you treat me that there's no tommorow if you don't saw me everyday!

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    1. Yah your very lucky to have him. Im sure you will find him. If not, it means, your not meant for each other.

      Jake here.

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  20. Bai Ram, thanks for sharing this! Do you know that you're a superb writer?! Velez is a really good school but maybe you're in the wrong course haha. Was smiling the whole time while reading this esp. that i often visit the same places. You make our Sunday nights so exciting bai haha. I hope your series of stories never ends, every Sunday gyud, so it would mean you and Jon are still together. :)
    Btw, just curious. Do you let Jon read your posts here? ;-)
    - Lance (Banilad area)

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    1. wow bai this made my night! haha thanks kaayo bai and it's flattering na I make your Sunday nights exciting hahaha
      -author

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  21. This is my first time commenting in any sites....bff im sorry...hope ur happy now...pls forgive me for what i did to you...hope you understand...im still your bff...im always very thankful to meet someone like you! You know who am i!

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  22. Ram bai...my appolgy if i use ur stories to find my bff.... This is my first time commenting in any blog...i have a lot message from him just now. If i dont find him here...this is my karma...i just want to hear he is okay!

    Jayson!

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  23. Ram, TUPAD TA! - igat

    Can we stay like this for a while (hugging) - mas igat

    Pick me up?
    Actually ...
    What?
    Look at your window - pinaka ka igat ;)

    Hahha the best bai.. Next chapter na 1wk nasad mi maghulat... Midterm pajud Ron hahha..

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  24. Hi Ram, i waited for this and will wait again for the next part. I think it's more than your story but more of how you shared it to us. I admire the sincerity. I hope we can have coffee sometime this September when I'll be visiting Cebu...

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  25. xeeeeeyt baaaaaai. Kabitin wuuuui. Grabe i've been waiting for this installment. I can't even think nga until chapter 4 ra kutob. huhuhu.

    SORRY HA, but suuuuuuuuper rare kaau stories dire written in English. And u just nailed it.
    In fact, i think this is the only one written in English I have read.

    When you end your story, is there any possibility you will still write for us? If from personal experience, i think it'd be a lot easier for u. If not what about fiction? hihi

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    1. haha thanks a lot bai! I'm not entirely sure bai, so far Jon's the only real thing I've had experience with (and I kinda want to keep it that way for now hahaha) as for fiction, probably no because school demands so much of my time bai. In fact, I just shared my story because I remembered Jon one night and I was maoying over him haha
      -author

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    2. lelz.... i soooooo love it jud bai/dodoooong.... sooooo intriguin. BUT yeah sakto ka, school lng sa jud. I bet CIM na u now. hihi...

      I hope u have read "The Fall Back" it's written in Tagalog, BUT i soooo feel urs and Jon's fate is smilar to that of that story. 10 years in the making lng. So i'm excited for both of u.

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  26. this story makes you swoon ang lakas ng kilig factor, took me back to a time when it was all so innocent and pure ..... i like the way you merge cebuano and english, very natural, i can tell that's ur comfort zone.... makes me want to go back to cebu and stay a little longer.... the cebu tourism authority needs someone like u because u sure can make people go and visit cebu :) good job - lbl

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  27. bitin kau oi! hahaha. hulat2x nasad tas part 4 ani,

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  28. The story is well written indeed! Your writing skills are very good. Rare lang ang sumulat dito sa ganitong level. I hope i meet you in the future and hoping that we can be friends author. More power to you! :))

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  29. Ram bai....you were able to bring back my memories....great job!

    Jayson!

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  30. I can't sleep ram...i very excited what will happen to you and jon! Another one week of hell waiting!

    Jayson!

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  31. Ram....i hope ur stories its not the same fate as mine...enjoy life together...

    Jayson!

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  32. forgot to tell u bai that this made me want to learn cebuano more, for now, medyo nakasabot un poquito .... hala naghalo ang cebuano and spanish haha.... ok lang ang walang masyadong sex para ma-maintain yung integrity ng story, it's about the purity and innocence of teen age love ..... minsan kasi medyo distracting lang yung sobrang sex, this is not a story about casual sex anyways, personal opinion ko lang naman..... hindi ba pwedeng mag upload ng story mid week, talagang weekly lang? sucks big time, one week is too long, right guys? :) - lbl

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    1. haha thanks bai! and besides, love isn't always about sex. Patience will be tested gyud with this site bai haha
      -author

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  33. Grabeh... Kilig jud bai.. Ma recall nku mga places sa time nag adto ko cebu... Now mas g ganahan ko mubalik ug cebu.. Thank u author. Part 4 pls..

    Pao ng Davao

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  34. Very very well written. So much kilig factor. It's like reading a Sweet Dreams pocketbook story for boys.

    Great job Ram. :-)

    (My first time to comment as well.)

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  35. Very nice story, maka inspire mag share LOL

    Jin

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  36. Very good English bai. I love the story. It's something that I just have to read without the pressure to understand each word but the plot didn't leave every letter you wrote. The story was there all along.

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  37. Ram, your story is a treasure! Well written and your command of the language is just beyond outstanding! We are glued to your story and I personally don't want it to end. This has become a habit on Sundays going Mondays. I wish you the best! Ram, submit your picture to Admin, and Admin I nominate Ram to be the face of KM! I also second the motion! Hahaha! Artista na ka ngari bai! Ngano'ng ana man ka ka-perfect?! ~Xian-Xian

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    1. wow thanks bai! and no, I'm not that good oy haha but bai, things always end whether we like it or not bai and we've got to live with that. Feels great to be a "Sunday habit" bai so thanks hahaha mauwaw sad ko ana bai and wow I'm not perfect haha
      -author

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    2. Basta para naho perfect ka kay perfect imong story. I can feel how good of a person and lover you are! Isang tulog na lang Ram! Sana hindi kami biguin ni Admin at ipost niya na ang next part! This is life... If I only live in the same world you're in Ram...

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  38. I really liked your story a lot. so nakakakilig. well-written with real emotions talaga bai. hope i can meet u both when i get back to Cebu. :)) so much kilig factor.

    - jan

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  39. looking forward to the next chapter. can't wait.

    - jan

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  40. Otoyo... brad... kabalo ka anang kilig ig human ug ihi? Hahaha unta magkadayon mo brad.. next chapter na..

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    1. taya that feeling bai haha stay tuned bai
      -author

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  41. Wow! Ram, I like your story. I can easily imagine the places that you mentioned here because I've been there to date once or twice already especially in Starbukcks Oakridge. (*Wink)
    It would be great to meet you here in Cebu or maybe I already know you haha.

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    1. thanks bai! I doubt that you know me bai haha
      -author

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  42. Nice kaayo imong story Ram! First time nako maka-comment dre sa KM. Keep up the good work! Unta e add ko nimo sa facebook hehe :) - Mrchinitopascual

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  43. can't wait to read the next chapter...

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  44. Waaahh gikilig napud ko bai haha...ako diay tong ngdemand ug reply nmo bai, hope karemember pka kdtong kilig2 sumthing. Btw im james bai nice to know u bai ram haha umiigat ha

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    1. kakilig lang bai, kiligon sad ko bai hahaha yeah I remember
      -author

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    2. haha hope to meet you puhon dre cebu bai para sa personal ko kiligon haha

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  45. TC here. Walay stories from TC?

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    1. Naah doh. Pangitaa ang Bantayan lovestory. taga main to cla kay accountancy man

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  46. gawd one week pa ulit nang paghihintay. Story is good tho!

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  47. Ram bai...the way your telling your stories is an inspiration for all of us...
    Your famous now! Your a hit!

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Jayson!

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  48. Bai! Nindot kaayo imong story. Maka ah!
    Kilig kaayo ko bai! Mayta ma ing.ani sad ko oi!
    Swerte jud kay ka bai! Author pwede ko makahibaw sa imong facebook name? Kay pwede ni nako himuon imong story ug movie sa cinema.. Director mn gud akong uncle.. This is your oppurtunity bai! PM lang nko sa gmail bai: ilovejamesperez@gmail.com

    -CHRIS from Cebu

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  49. I don't know what is up with me but my eyes got so teary . Hahaha.
    Worth the wait. Though you already had given us a peek on what might happen sa next chapters. Sige lang gyud bai. Hintay pa rin. Hahaha
    Di ba pwedeng kahit every mid week yung update? Kaka-inis. Hahaha. May God bless you bai. Kainspire :-)

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  50. I don't know what is up with me but my eyes got so teary . Hahaha.
    Worth the wait. Though you already had given us a peek on what might happen sa next chapters. Sige lang gyud bai. Hintay pa rin. Hahaha
    Di ba pwedeng kahit every mid week yung update? Kaka-inis. Hahaha. May God bless you bai. Kainspire :-)

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  51. Ram bai...im going to cebu next wk. Can i meet you and jon at ayala starbucks! It's my honor and previlage to meet you guys!

    Jayson!

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  52. Bai! Galigad ligad ko sa ka kilig.. xet memeng!!! We may be 4 time zones appart but ako jud gihulat ang every chapter... damn!!! This should become a book or a movie.. ang GOOONDOOOOH! i truly hope and pray for your happiness...

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    1. haha thanks a lot bai! wow flattered that our story reached 4 time zones away! haha thanks bai! :)

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  53. Yamaa uie, hahaha nice one doh . . . tig araan sad bya mi sa ko barkada dha starbucks sa oakridge . . .

    cge padayun bai, paspasi ang nxt chapter . . . :D

    hahaha question lng, how did earn your confidence on confessing each others feelings? was that just because your drunk or naai lain rason ???

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    1. taya bai, kamo to ang saba sa? haha just kidding bai. Well back then, I've always wanted to tell him naman gyud bai but I was just waiting for the best opportunity to do it. the alcohol helped with the confidence part lang bai haha
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  54. Grabe maka-aura ang mga ate! Manghang mangha naman ata masyado sa storya. Cute yung tone ng author, don't mistake kilig with brilliance. Magbasa kayo ng Chuck Palahniuk o Hemingway nang malaman niyo ang magaling magsulat. Jusko mga bakla kinilig lang ng konte! Amusing naman ang kababawan ng mga ate. But to be fair rin sa writer, breath of fresh air na hndi puro libog ang nababasa dito. Thank you for this koya.

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      -author

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  55. This is actually the best true story I've ever read in my entire life. Char. HAHAHA It makes me feel really proud of the fact that you're a Cebuano because the story is very well-written. I find it very relatable because some words are in Bisaya (very casual) and I know very well the places that are mentioned. Lastly, gikilig jud to the bones. HAHAHAH

    I can't wait for part 4. Post na. :) Mana bitaw inyung Midterms. :P


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    1. haha thanks a lot bai! yes, I'm working on it but then even after midterms bai, bugbog gihapon mi with exams haha but the 4th is on its way na bai :)
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    2. Same ta bai. Every week is like hell to us also. =)) Bitaw, excited naku sa part 4. Thanks daan. Haha

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  56. Ram bai...even ur not answering my request im still going to cebu next week at sturbucks ayala...i am tall...white and handsome! Hope to see you there with jon...your my inspiration...coz i lost my bestfriend!

    Jayson!

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  57. I'm staying at waterfront if you both dont like to meet me in starbucks ayala hope to see you there!

    Jayson!

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  58. Why so bitin Mr. Author? I think I like you na. Hahahahaha! Kidding. I can sense nga nice ka nga guy. Mr. Author, I hope magkita ta tho di lang ko gwapo, bright, ug dato parehas nimo. Haha. The story is nice ug tagos jud sa heart ug kilig jud. God bless. :)

    P.S. Mouli na ra ba ko'g Cebu next month or di ba kaha next year para mag-tuon. Huhu. Huntingon jud taka diha sa imong school ba bahala'g impossible kaayo. :P

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  59. Hey Ram! I'm the one who commented that I would go 04C to Bo's Raintree just to see you. As a writer myself, I' d like to say that you have made an amazing job in your write-up. You never fail to leave me with my heart's ups and downs in the plot. Now, I'm desperate to know you better. I really do hope that you will go UST or PGH in your med school. Let's be classmates! Hahahaha. Not really kidding though. I hope I see you in some coffee shops because I'm a coffee shop aficionado myself. I mostly hang out at Starbucks Ayala, Starbucks IT (both cafes there), Starbucks Oakridge, Bo's IT, Coffee Dream Gorordo, Coffee Dream IT, Coffee Bean and Tea Leaf IT, Coffee Cat, Cafe Noriter.
    Baka Milk Tea Shops rin. I like going to Chatime, Serenitea, Bubble Bee Escario,Tea Symphony (in Ramos).

    I hope our paths somehow meet someday.

    -Uptown Guy

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  60. i don't know but please author don't include your intimate moments to the detail in your future publish. it will kinda ruin my reading i guess. i'd like to read this as it is... the kilig, the drama, and more more kilig not like reading 50 shades of grey, we already have enough of those here, the ooohhs and aaahhs. coz that's what's separating you from the rest of the stories here, the wholesomeness. but i'd also like to think that you and Ram did it though. hehehe. basta clean lang ha kay idol na bya tka. can't wait for the next installment.

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    2. i said "Ram" instead of Jon. lol. so naa jud diay intimate moments. aguy! PM sa akua bi. hahaha

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  61. KJ sad aning Anonymous August 18 at 11:42PM oi.

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    1. KJ na sya kay di man sya maka relate kay wa man manguyab niya kay bati man ug nawong, unsaon na lang gyud na.

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  62. One of the most celebrated stories here! Hats off Mr. Author!
    Ultramegasolid fave line: "Can we stay like this for a while?" he whispered and again, I complied.

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  63. Ayaaaaaan na naman ang galing TAPING! Ahahaha pathetic

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  64. Ram bai...your making me crazy!

    Jayson!

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  65. I have absolutely no pleasure in the stimulants in which I sometimes so madly indulge. It has not been in the pursuit of pleasure that I have periled life and reputation and reason. It has been the desperate attempt to escape from torturing memories, from a sense of insupportable loneliness and a dread of some strange impending doom.

    Ram bai...im crazy inlove with your stories...hope i can share mine too..but my heart still bleeding!

    Jayson!

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  66. superstar ka na jud bai daming requests to meet u in person i won't be surprised kung meron ram fans club na din.... u can't blame us for taking an instant liking to your story, lahat nakaka- relate....i can imagine na a lot more guys hang out now at that starbucks hoping to have the same experience....thanks for being an inspiration bai :) - lbl

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  67. gling sobra..plz publish npo ung chap 4..

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  68. Wondering if I'll be having my story too. Never had this kind of relationship. So excited to have one soon, hmmm *waiting

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  69. hmmm. Id like to get to know a velezian here. I usually study out at bos ramos. anyone velezian?

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  70. Naa sad diay in-ani nga story? Excellent story! How I wish maka-experience ko ug in-ani nga story :) Thanks for inspiring us. I can't wait for the next part!!!

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  71. Ram, busy na? hehehe! :) naghulat na kos part 4. demanding ra hahaha

    AJ.

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  72. D gyud ko hilig mubasag mga ngani nga storya pero bai payts kaayo gikilig ang animal (ako)hehe... part 4 na bai ky nagpanikad nakog paabot... p.s ug magsulat kag kabahin sa sex ninyo bai i lang e elaborate ky para dili mawala ang decency sa storya. Kudos ninyong 2

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  73. Tara. Hang out lng.
    - Renz 20 Cebu.

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  74. Your story was amazing! I wish, I could somehow feel and experience the same as what you had shared. Reading your story was worthwhile though I admit myself being confused about my own feelings. I really had a great time reading your story that I felt maybe I could love the way you do. Sharing this story to everyone (maybe in my part) is a lot of courage to take and for that I admire you. Somehow, your story reach into our hearts and the same way you write your love (love experience) and share it to us. We really like it! I'm looking forward for the part 4

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  75. Ni lapas nag 1week wla pai update! Huhuhuhu! Perti bya jd nakong huwat. Upload nang part 4 author puhless!!! :))

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  76. bai taga cebu bya ko,ganahan kaau ko sa imo storya ;) pureso ga hulat jud ko ba,nia man kog abroad gkilig jud ko ba,hehe pero murag naa nako idea sa ending,mas lami jud mo mabasa kanang mga naka experience na jud og love sa both sex dba ram? kay maka relate jud

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  77. Part 4 please?
    Velezian here. MT

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  78. Hey velezian. lol. Is there a way i can get to know u. lets chill at bo's raintree.

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  79. It has been 2 weeks wala pa gihapo'y part 4. :(

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  80. #ConyoProblems

    But still nkakakilig pa den :D next part author and admin. Tska bka may update na dn ung FairyTail :D

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  81. I was at Bo's coffee Fullybooked in Ayala yesterday since 2pm til midnight and was waiting to see and read the 4th part of your story. A bit disappointed yet I'm still hoping for the story to be posted next Sunday. Duha na gud ka domingo ang niagi pero wa man jud koy nkita na post. Ram or/and Mr. KM, please post the next sequel and we're waiting for it. Murag pildi pa ang "ice bucket challenge" sa trend sg story mo Ram.

    Looking forward for a response. Thanks!

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  82. nindot ang story.......kani adto nga bata pa ako edad...wa jud ko kasulay ana......kutob ra ko tan aw ,, totok, ibog..nya pantasya.......now im 41 this coming 23.......naa koy ka ipon....syempre girl....pero di jud ma likayan nga mototok og laki.....wala siya kabalo sa ako sekreto.......

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  83. Loving your story.. Can't wait for the next chap bai..

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  84. lol. hey dude. I study out a lot in Stabucks Oakridge too and I sometimes see two Velezians there studying. Cant help but think it's you guys. haha.

    -fellow Velezian, BSN4

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  85. Ram! We should be friends! LOL I'm a fan already. You should publish more stories. hahaha ;)

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  86. I just die. Soo kilig. Can't help it. Kudos!

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