By: Max
Hey everyone! This is Max here. I got mostly positive comments sa last story ko so I decided to have a part 2. I altered a few dialogues just to make it a bit cheesier, but it’s not entirely fictional. Hope y’all enjoy it, hihi xx
Kent and I started our relationship last summer, and we’ve been inseparable since. Siyempre anjan din yung kaunting selosan, onting tampuhan, but it’s a part of every relationship, I guess. Karamihan sa mga kaibigan ko hindi alam ang tunkol samin. I only told a few who I’m sure are trustworthy and open-minded. My family doesn’t have any idea at all. Well, may mga times na muntikan na kami mahuli, katulad nung nasa isang restaurant kami ni Kent, and I saw my family outside so literally had to hide under the table. Meron din instance na papasok kami ng sinehan and I saw close relatives passing by. Trust me, you don’t wanna know what we had to do to avoid them.
Wala namang problema si Kent sa pagtatago. Matagal nang alam at tanggap ng kanyang mga magulang at kaibigan ang kanyang sexuality. I wish I could say the same for me.
As the months went by we started getting to know each other more. I just found out he spent 12 years of his childhood in America. Kaya siguro he has a liberated lifestyle, which is a good thing. Nalaman ko din na we almost have the same taste in practically everything. We’re into rock/indie music, we belong to the Supernatural and TVD fandoms, and we both admitted to having a girl-crush on Lana Del Rey. And he also reads books, swoon. Haha!
Ok so back to the story…
Kalagitnaan ng July, kakatapos lang ng prelims. Nasa 2nd year na ko sa kursong MassCom sa hindi ko papangalanang unibersidad, for the sake of anonymity.
It was 10 am when I started feeling depressed. I failed two exams, I was feeling like I’ve lost a friend, and syempre di maiiwasan ang mga A-hole professors. So to sum it all up, I was having a pretty bad day.
All the pressure was just weighing me down. Pressure na maging magaling na estudyante, maging mabuting anak, maging masayang kaibigan, pressure na WAG MAGING BAKLA. All I knew was that I had to get away. Nung tanghali na yun tinext ko si Kent at tinanong kung pwede niya ko puntahan. Makalipas ang ilang minuto ay tinawagan niya ko.
“Hey babe, what’s up? Is there something wrong?” sabi niya.
“Nothing, I really just wanna see you,” sagot ko.
“Aww babe, I can’t. Nasa work ako eh, I’m sorry,” sabi niya.
“Oh... okay.” I said, feeling deflated.
“Wait. Where are you?” he said after a pause.
“Dito sa school, why?”
“Sige pupuntahan kita jan okay? I love you.” I tried to object but before I can react binaba na niya yung phone niya.
Great, now I feel WAY more terrible. He would leave his work behind and risk losing his job? Because of some STUPID PHONE CALL? God I’m such an idiot.
May apat pa kong subjects pero imbis na pumasok ako ay naghintay na lang ako sa resto sa tapat ng school. May isang oras din ako nakatunganga dun hanggang dumating si Kent.
“Hey Max, what’s up?” tanong niya sakin.
“Nothing, it’s just... I shouldn’t have called you, it was stupid,” sabi ko.
“Is there a problem?” he asked calmly.
I didn’t reply but my eyes must have spoken for myself.
Hinawakan niya ang kamay ko. “Wanna get outta here?”
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Makalipas ang isang oras ay nasa condo na niya kami at nag iimpake ng mga gamit na dadalhin namin. A tent, a comforter, clothes, some food, and a grill. Camping trip pala ang binabalak ng mokong.
“Gago ka,” sabi ko pagsakay namin ng sasakyan niya.
“Anu ka ba, this is exactly what you need,” he said. “Roadtrip. Adventure. Spontaeneity.”
“Spell mo nga?” I said jokingly.
“S-P-O—” he started spelling.
“Oo na, sige na,” I cut him off. “But Kent, seriously. Where are we going? Judging from the clothes we brought it seems like we’re having a field trip in a frickin’ freezer.”
“It’s a secret.” He said as he pulled off the driveway.
“Man, we’re gonna be SO screwed,” I said after a moment.
“It’s okaaay, nagpaalam na ko sa boss ko,” sabi niya. “C’mon Max, let’s just have fun and enjoy the ride.”
Nagpaalam na din ako sa parents ko. “Gonna be out tonight, sleep over @ erica’s,” ang text ko sa kanila. Si Erica ay isa sa mga pinaka pinagkakatiwalaan kong kaibigan at alam din niya ang tungkol samin ni Kent. I warned her na din not to give away my whereabouts. Siya na din ang bahala magpaliwanag sa school kinabukasan.
We drove for about a couple hours, blasting some really good music in his car. At around 4PM tumigil kami sa paanan ng isang bundok somewhere in Quezon. For a while I was really confused because it kinda looked like a forest to me. But apparently kailangan namin akyatin yung bundok on foot, habang yung mga gamit namin dadalhin ng pick-up truck sa campsite. It had a somewhat rocky terrain kasi kaya imposibleng makaakyat ang ordinary cars like Kent’s.
“ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?” ang sigaw ko kay Kent after 30 minutes ng hiking. I was getting really tired and cranky. And to be honest hanggang ngayon naiinis pa rin ako sa kanya kasi I didn’t even get to ride the really cool Hummer truck, which was used to pick up our stuff.
“C’mon, malapit na. You’ll love it,” sabi niya. I just rolled my eyes. He’s enjoying this.
We arrived just in time to see the sunset, and for a moment I forgot every single one of my problems. He wasn’t kidding. I really did love the place. The campsite was breathtaking. It was like an open field of Bermuda grass situated high up in the mountains. There were also taller mountains surrounding the area so it kinda looked like a valley of some sort.
“Wow,” sabi ko. Napatulala na lang ako sa nakita ko. Ang ganda ng mixture ng colors sa sky, I can’t even describe it. Anlamig ng simoy ng hangin, you would think nasa baguio ka. The slight drizzle made an illusion of glitters falling everywhere. The warmth of my boyfriend’s arms around me, it was just perfect. For once in my life everything was perfect.
“I told you, you’ll love it,” Kent said as he kissed my cheek.
And once again I was on the verge of crying, hindi dahil malungkot ako kundi dahil masaya ako. Masaya ako dahil sa murang edad nakahanap na ako ng pagmamahal. Pagmamahal na di ko inakalang mabibiyayaan ako. I guess I was just so used to being hated and ignored by everyone that I didn’t believe I could also be loved.
“Aww, Max, umiiyak ka nanaman?”
“No dumbass, I’m just happy,” sabi ko. And then we kissed.
We spent the next few hours huddled closely next to a campfire. (No, we didn’t start it. Some camp caretaker did it for us, haha.) At around 10 pm it started to drizzle again, and it was getting cold outside anyway kaya nagpasya kami ni Kent na pumasok na sa tent. May cabin sa campsite, but we wanted to make it an authentic camping experience kaya we decided to use the tent.
Once we got inside we took off our clothes and collapsed onto the mattress. We didn’t do anything at first, but the tension was there so I made the first move.
I started kissing his lips. Bumaba ang mga halik ko sa kanyang tenga, sa leeg, sa balikat. Pagdating ko sa kanyang mga utong ay marahan itong kinagat, at nagsimula nang umungol si Kent. Bumaba pa ako sa kanyang pusod hanggang marating ko ang kanyang sandata na ngayon ay nagsisimula nang tumigas.
Dinilaan ko ito mula sa base hanggang sa tuktok. Pinaikot ko ang aking dila sa kanyang ulo, na siya namang nagpasigaw kay Kent sa sarap. Hindi ko na siya pinigilan dahil sa lakas ng hangin sa labas ay sigurado din namang walang makakarinig samin. Sobrang tigas na ng kanyang ari.
“Ahh, subo mo na,” bagamat nagmamakaawa na siya sakin ay hindi ko muna siya pinagbigyan. Bumaba ang mga pagdila ko sa kanyang mga itlog, na nagdulot ng kiliti kay Kent.
Bumalik ako sa ulo ng kanyang ari at sinimulan siyang chupain ng dahan dahan. Bakas sa mukha ni Kent ang matinding libog sa kanyang pagkakapikit at sa pagkakagat niya ng labi. Nakapatong din ang ulo niya sa kanyang mga kamay kaya mas lalo akong ginanahan. “Para sa’yo ang gabing ‘to, Kent,” inisip ko.
“Ahhh yeahh, sige pa,” Napaka sexy tignan ni Kent. Nagsimula na rin akong tigasan kaya hindi nagtagal ay nag iba na kami ng posisyon. Habang tumutuwad ako ay nagsuot na si Kent ng condom na kanyang pinahiran niya ng lube. Pumwesto siya sa likuran ko at dahan-dahang ipinasok ang kanyang ari sa aking pwet. Makalipas ang ilang saglit ay nakapag-adjust na rin ako sa laki ng kanyang alaga at nagsimula na siyang gumalaw.
“Ahhhh sarap mo babe!” bulong sakin ni Kent. Dumapa siya sa aking likod at nagkasalubong ang aming mga labi. Humiwalay siya sa aming pagkakahalik at marahan akong kinagat sa tenga, sa leeg, sa batok, habang nagsimula na rin maglakbay ang kanyang mga kamay. Pinisil niya ang isa sa aking mga utong habang ang isang kamay naman niya ay sinimulan akong salsalin.
“AHH YEAH! RIGHT THERE!” Napasigaw ako nang biglang matamaan ni Kent ang aking prostate. Sa mga sumunod niyang paggalaw ay iyon na ang kanyang pinunterya. Tanging mga ungol na lang ang namutawi sa aming mga labi.
Makalipas ang ilang minuto ay pinahiga ako ni Kent at ipinatong ang aking mga binti sa kanyang balikat. Dumapa siya sakin at ipinasok muli ang kanyang naghuhumindig na ari sa aking butas. Kung kanina ay dinahan-dahan niya ang pagtira sakin ngayon naman ay mapusok at malakas ang kanyang mga naging paggalaw.
Hinawakan ni Kent ang aking mga kamay at inilapit ang kanyang mukha upang ako ay mahalikan. Pabilis na rin ng pabilis ang pagtira niya sa aking pwet.
“AHH! SIGE PA!” sigaw ko matapos niyang masapul muli ang aking g-spot.
“Malapit na ko babe,” sambit ni Kent na naghahabol ng hininga.
“Ahh, ako din AHH,” ungol ko.
“AHHHHHHHH!” Ilang kadyot pa ay nilabasan na rin kami pareho.
Makalipas ang ilang saglit ay binunot ni Kent ang kanyang sandata mula sa aking butas at nahiga sa tabi ko.
“THAT WAS THE BEST,” bulalas ni Kent.
Sa sobrang hingal ko ay napatawa nalang ako. It was getting cold again so we huddled closely to each other. Out of all the things we did today this seems to be the most intimate. I love the feel of his warmth around me. It’s protective, and gentle, and everything I ever wanted. And then I remembered the question that’s been bugging me for days.
“Kent?”
“Hmm?” His voice was small, almost sleepy.
“Can I ask you something?” sabi ko.
“Sure,” sabi niya.
“Why did you choose me?” I asked.
“What do you mean?”
“It’s just... y’know... there are so many people out there. Better people. Why did you choose me? I’m not actually that hot. Or smart. Or talented. Or anything.”
“You still don’t get it, do you?” he said gently. “I chose you because I wanted you. Your little flaws. Your childishness. The way you bite your fingernails whenever you’re nervous. You’re who I want. And I need you to stop thinking you’re not good enough for anyone because you are. And you’re really cute so don’t even think otherwise. You’re perfect for me. Okay?”
“Okay.” He kissed the top of my head, and I s2g that was the sweetest feeling.
After that we talked about our future. I know, the chances of us actually being together are very slim, but we dreamed of it anyway. Sinabi niya sakin na once I become an adult he could probably get me a visa, and we could migrate to California, where we will be free. He also told me that his mom is excited to meet me, and that I would love her cooking. And then he sang a really loud and out-of-tune version of Somewhere in Neverland by All Time Low. It was really cute but I’m pretty sure I’ve never laughed harder in my entire life.
So yeah, that’s it! I got pretty emotional this chapter, haha. I’m not sure lang kung makakapagsulat pa ulet ako ng part 3, but i’ll try. Thanks for reading guys! xx
Kent and I started our relationship last summer, and we’ve been inseparable since. Siyempre anjan din yung kaunting selosan, onting tampuhan, but it’s a part of every relationship, I guess. Karamihan sa mga kaibigan ko hindi alam ang tunkol samin. I only told a few who I’m sure are trustworthy and open-minded. My family doesn’t have any idea at all. Well, may mga times na muntikan na kami mahuli, katulad nung nasa isang restaurant kami ni Kent, and I saw my family outside so literally had to hide under the table. Meron din instance na papasok kami ng sinehan and I saw close relatives passing by. Trust me, you don’t wanna know what we had to do to avoid them.
Wala namang problema si Kent sa pagtatago. Matagal nang alam at tanggap ng kanyang mga magulang at kaibigan ang kanyang sexuality. I wish I could say the same for me.
As the months went by we started getting to know each other more. I just found out he spent 12 years of his childhood in America. Kaya siguro he has a liberated lifestyle, which is a good thing. Nalaman ko din na we almost have the same taste in practically everything. We’re into rock/indie music, we belong to the Supernatural and TVD fandoms, and we both admitted to having a girl-crush on Lana Del Rey. And he also reads books, swoon. Haha!
Ok so back to the story…
Kalagitnaan ng July, kakatapos lang ng prelims. Nasa 2nd year na ko sa kursong MassCom sa hindi ko papangalanang unibersidad, for the sake of anonymity.
It was 10 am when I started feeling depressed. I failed two exams, I was feeling like I’ve lost a friend, and syempre di maiiwasan ang mga A-hole professors. So to sum it all up, I was having a pretty bad day.
All the pressure was just weighing me down. Pressure na maging magaling na estudyante, maging mabuting anak, maging masayang kaibigan, pressure na WAG MAGING BAKLA. All I knew was that I had to get away. Nung tanghali na yun tinext ko si Kent at tinanong kung pwede niya ko puntahan. Makalipas ang ilang minuto ay tinawagan niya ko.
“Hey babe, what’s up? Is there something wrong?” sabi niya.
“Nothing, I really just wanna see you,” sagot ko.
“Aww babe, I can’t. Nasa work ako eh, I’m sorry,” sabi niya.
“Oh... okay.” I said, feeling deflated.
“Wait. Where are you?” he said after a pause.
“Dito sa school, why?”
“Sige pupuntahan kita jan okay? I love you.” I tried to object but before I can react binaba na niya yung phone niya.
Great, now I feel WAY more terrible. He would leave his work behind and risk losing his job? Because of some STUPID PHONE CALL? God I’m such an idiot.
May apat pa kong subjects pero imbis na pumasok ako ay naghintay na lang ako sa resto sa tapat ng school. May isang oras din ako nakatunganga dun hanggang dumating si Kent.
“Hey Max, what’s up?” tanong niya sakin.
“Nothing, it’s just... I shouldn’t have called you, it was stupid,” sabi ko.
“Is there a problem?” he asked calmly.
I didn’t reply but my eyes must have spoken for myself.
Hinawakan niya ang kamay ko. “Wanna get outta here?”
---------
Makalipas ang isang oras ay nasa condo na niya kami at nag iimpake ng mga gamit na dadalhin namin. A tent, a comforter, clothes, some food, and a grill. Camping trip pala ang binabalak ng mokong.
“Gago ka,” sabi ko pagsakay namin ng sasakyan niya.
“Anu ka ba, this is exactly what you need,” he said. “Roadtrip. Adventure. Spontaeneity.”
“Spell mo nga?” I said jokingly.
“S-P-O—” he started spelling.
“Oo na, sige na,” I cut him off. “But Kent, seriously. Where are we going? Judging from the clothes we brought it seems like we’re having a field trip in a frickin’ freezer.”
“It’s a secret.” He said as he pulled off the driveway.
“Man, we’re gonna be SO screwed,” I said after a moment.
“It’s okaaay, nagpaalam na ko sa boss ko,” sabi niya. “C’mon Max, let’s just have fun and enjoy the ride.”
Nagpaalam na din ako sa parents ko. “Gonna be out tonight, sleep over @ erica’s,” ang text ko sa kanila. Si Erica ay isa sa mga pinaka pinagkakatiwalaan kong kaibigan at alam din niya ang tungkol samin ni Kent. I warned her na din not to give away my whereabouts. Siya na din ang bahala magpaliwanag sa school kinabukasan.
We drove for about a couple hours, blasting some really good music in his car. At around 4PM tumigil kami sa paanan ng isang bundok somewhere in Quezon. For a while I was really confused because it kinda looked like a forest to me. But apparently kailangan namin akyatin yung bundok on foot, habang yung mga gamit namin dadalhin ng pick-up truck sa campsite. It had a somewhat rocky terrain kasi kaya imposibleng makaakyat ang ordinary cars like Kent’s.
“ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?” ang sigaw ko kay Kent after 30 minutes ng hiking. I was getting really tired and cranky. And to be honest hanggang ngayon naiinis pa rin ako sa kanya kasi I didn’t even get to ride the really cool Hummer truck, which was used to pick up our stuff.
“C’mon, malapit na. You’ll love it,” sabi niya. I just rolled my eyes. He’s enjoying this.
We arrived just in time to see the sunset, and for a moment I forgot every single one of my problems. He wasn’t kidding. I really did love the place. The campsite was breathtaking. It was like an open field of Bermuda grass situated high up in the mountains. There were also taller mountains surrounding the area so it kinda looked like a valley of some sort.
“Wow,” sabi ko. Napatulala na lang ako sa nakita ko. Ang ganda ng mixture ng colors sa sky, I can’t even describe it. Anlamig ng simoy ng hangin, you would think nasa baguio ka. The slight drizzle made an illusion of glitters falling everywhere. The warmth of my boyfriend’s arms around me, it was just perfect. For once in my life everything was perfect.
“I told you, you’ll love it,” Kent said as he kissed my cheek.
And once again I was on the verge of crying, hindi dahil malungkot ako kundi dahil masaya ako. Masaya ako dahil sa murang edad nakahanap na ako ng pagmamahal. Pagmamahal na di ko inakalang mabibiyayaan ako. I guess I was just so used to being hated and ignored by everyone that I didn’t believe I could also be loved.
“Aww, Max, umiiyak ka nanaman?”
“No dumbass, I’m just happy,” sabi ko. And then we kissed.
We spent the next few hours huddled closely next to a campfire. (No, we didn’t start it. Some camp caretaker did it for us, haha.) At around 10 pm it started to drizzle again, and it was getting cold outside anyway kaya nagpasya kami ni Kent na pumasok na sa tent. May cabin sa campsite, but we wanted to make it an authentic camping experience kaya we decided to use the tent.
Once we got inside we took off our clothes and collapsed onto the mattress. We didn’t do anything at first, but the tension was there so I made the first move.
I started kissing his lips. Bumaba ang mga halik ko sa kanyang tenga, sa leeg, sa balikat. Pagdating ko sa kanyang mga utong ay marahan itong kinagat, at nagsimula nang umungol si Kent. Bumaba pa ako sa kanyang pusod hanggang marating ko ang kanyang sandata na ngayon ay nagsisimula nang tumigas.
Dinilaan ko ito mula sa base hanggang sa tuktok. Pinaikot ko ang aking dila sa kanyang ulo, na siya namang nagpasigaw kay Kent sa sarap. Hindi ko na siya pinigilan dahil sa lakas ng hangin sa labas ay sigurado din namang walang makakarinig samin. Sobrang tigas na ng kanyang ari.
“Ahh, subo mo na,” bagamat nagmamakaawa na siya sakin ay hindi ko muna siya pinagbigyan. Bumaba ang mga pagdila ko sa kanyang mga itlog, na nagdulot ng kiliti kay Kent.
Bumalik ako sa ulo ng kanyang ari at sinimulan siyang chupain ng dahan dahan. Bakas sa mukha ni Kent ang matinding libog sa kanyang pagkakapikit at sa pagkakagat niya ng labi. Nakapatong din ang ulo niya sa kanyang mga kamay kaya mas lalo akong ginanahan. “Para sa’yo ang gabing ‘to, Kent,” inisip ko.
“Ahhh yeahh, sige pa,” Napaka sexy tignan ni Kent. Nagsimula na rin akong tigasan kaya hindi nagtagal ay nag iba na kami ng posisyon. Habang tumutuwad ako ay nagsuot na si Kent ng condom na kanyang pinahiran niya ng lube. Pumwesto siya sa likuran ko at dahan-dahang ipinasok ang kanyang ari sa aking pwet. Makalipas ang ilang saglit ay nakapag-adjust na rin ako sa laki ng kanyang alaga at nagsimula na siyang gumalaw.
“Ahhhh sarap mo babe!” bulong sakin ni Kent. Dumapa siya sa aking likod at nagkasalubong ang aming mga labi. Humiwalay siya sa aming pagkakahalik at marahan akong kinagat sa tenga, sa leeg, sa batok, habang nagsimula na rin maglakbay ang kanyang mga kamay. Pinisil niya ang isa sa aking mga utong habang ang isang kamay naman niya ay sinimulan akong salsalin.
“AHH YEAH! RIGHT THERE!” Napasigaw ako nang biglang matamaan ni Kent ang aking prostate. Sa mga sumunod niyang paggalaw ay iyon na ang kanyang pinunterya. Tanging mga ungol na lang ang namutawi sa aming mga labi.
Makalipas ang ilang minuto ay pinahiga ako ni Kent at ipinatong ang aking mga binti sa kanyang balikat. Dumapa siya sakin at ipinasok muli ang kanyang naghuhumindig na ari sa aking butas. Kung kanina ay dinahan-dahan niya ang pagtira sakin ngayon naman ay mapusok at malakas ang kanyang mga naging paggalaw.
Hinawakan ni Kent ang aking mga kamay at inilapit ang kanyang mukha upang ako ay mahalikan. Pabilis na rin ng pabilis ang pagtira niya sa aking pwet.
“AHH! SIGE PA!” sigaw ko matapos niyang masapul muli ang aking g-spot.
“Malapit na ko babe,” sambit ni Kent na naghahabol ng hininga.
“Ahh, ako din AHH,” ungol ko.
“AHHHHHHHH!” Ilang kadyot pa ay nilabasan na rin kami pareho.
Makalipas ang ilang saglit ay binunot ni Kent ang kanyang sandata mula sa aking butas at nahiga sa tabi ko.
“THAT WAS THE BEST,” bulalas ni Kent.
Sa sobrang hingal ko ay napatawa nalang ako. It was getting cold again so we huddled closely to each other. Out of all the things we did today this seems to be the most intimate. I love the feel of his warmth around me. It’s protective, and gentle, and everything I ever wanted. And then I remembered the question that’s been bugging me for days.
“Kent?”
“Hmm?” His voice was small, almost sleepy.
“Can I ask you something?” sabi ko.
“Sure,” sabi niya.
“Why did you choose me?” I asked.
“What do you mean?”
“It’s just... y’know... there are so many people out there. Better people. Why did you choose me? I’m not actually that hot. Or smart. Or talented. Or anything.”
“You still don’t get it, do you?” he said gently. “I chose you because I wanted you. Your little flaws. Your childishness. The way you bite your fingernails whenever you’re nervous. You’re who I want. And I need you to stop thinking you’re not good enough for anyone because you are. And you’re really cute so don’t even think otherwise. You’re perfect for me. Okay?”
“Okay.” He kissed the top of my head, and I s2g that was the sweetest feeling.
After that we talked about our future. I know, the chances of us actually being together are very slim, but we dreamed of it anyway. Sinabi niya sakin na once I become an adult he could probably get me a visa, and we could migrate to California, where we will be free. He also told me that his mom is excited to meet me, and that I would love her cooking. And then he sang a really loud and out-of-tune version of Somewhere in Neverland by All Time Low. It was really cute but I’m pretty sure I’ve never laughed harder in my entire life.
So yeah, that’s it! I got pretty emotional this chapter, haha. I’m not sure lang kung makakapagsulat pa ulet ako ng part 3, but i’ll try. Thanks for reading guys! xx
So cute ^(oo)^ pag nakita ko yang Kent mo aagawin ko siya sayo. MWAHAHAHA XD kidding asides, amg cute niyo talaga. ^3^ pakisabi kay Kent Ilovehim xDD
ReplyDeletecute ng story nyo, sana makahanap din ako ng Kent ng katulad nya..:)
ReplyDeleteSo cute. I wish I could find my Kent too.
ReplyDeleteWag na po mag-English kung mali po grammar. ''Reads books'' . Sobrang hilig mo po sa 's'. Hahaha!
ReplyDeleteGrammar is not important in one handed fiction. The goal is to get you off.
DeleteYeah you're right, that bitch needs a grammar teacher and I feel does't like other (s') and I swear to the READS & BOOKS that I could clearly read between words that the "s" the bitch likes are not from the ends of the words but the (s') from the beginning like s_ _!
Deletereally cute. :) i kn0w exactly just how you feel.
ReplyDeletefor a moment there your story made me feel "infinite"(drama). idk I don't usually don't like these love-dovey shits kasi i go here to get off pero yours is nice! Cheers to you guys!
ReplyDeleteEric 19
btw yaan mo lang yang haters...
Shitssssssssssssssssssssss why? why? why so sweet. haha!
ReplyDeleteNakakaingit!! waaahhhh
ReplyDeleteAng galing, napakasweet nyo. Sana tumagal pa kayo at sana matupad ang dreams nyo :)
ReplyDeletePati grammar nangungurek.. Haha.. Ayan basag ka tuloi..
ReplyDeleteNyc story .. 1st time kong magcomment...
Same lang tayo @last commentor. It's my 1st time dn mgcomment. Push mo lang yan Kuya writer. God bless
DeleteNakakainspired nman. Sna katulad dn ni kent ang mgging frst bf ko. He's so sweet. -17
ReplyDeletefirst time nyo lang naghahanap ng makakapareha sinswerte agad kayo inggit much sana ako din one day makahanap ng kent ko. @max we're almost in the same situation.
ReplyDeleteyou are so lucky having kent at your side..wish you the best max..
ReplyDeleteWow ganda ng story mo. Pwede part 3? Request po.
ReplyDeleteSaan kaya pwede maghanap ng boyfriend,,,sinung may alam,, hehe,,, yan tuloy #curiosity_rules.... !!
ReplyDeleteLAAAANAAAA!!! I sooo love this writer. Fav na itech! ♥♥♥
ReplyDeletei want more...,PART 3 na
ReplyDelete